[vebjorn]

Here`s two versions. One with improved "hooters" and some other small fixes and the same with a loincloth(because the "bush" became a bit too obvious for the editor of conan) As for color changes, that`ll come later. I`m not sure how I want it yet.

NOTE: added more improvements to the loincloth and moved her bellybutton a wee bit.

-Veb



[This message has been edited by vebjorn (edited December 11, 2000).]

[burn0ut]

not much to say except these really kick ass!

[zthee]

hello there

it's a really great image!

but the second one don't look as good as the first. Mainly because you've lost some of the volyme. the second one simply dosen't look as evil as the first, she look more "cute" in lionscloth (kind of fluffy). and i think you should keep it evil..

so how about just puting the loincloth around her waist?

just an idea

anyway keep it going, it's really great work!

(and i didn't say this just because i want to see her breast..)

//zthee

[Anthony]

Looks good - the loincloth definately looks tacked on though. I know you were just adding it at the end, and didn't want to spend time on it, but it really does look like you just spent 5 minutes pasting it on. Nice image though.

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-Anthony
Carpe Carpem

[Atreyu]

Hey,

I think the belly button is off to the left, that it should be at the edge of that lightest value. Also, you could put the bow behind her; last, can you lower the nipple and move it a tiny bit to the right?

I wish I could color like you though, that is absolutely awesome.

Here's a pic of moving the belly button and lowering the nipple:



[This message has been edited by Atreyu (edited December 10, 2000).]

[endrigan]

what do rez and size do you paint these at ?

[samdragon]

Great colors as usual Veb!
Your compositions are looking much better. They have more movement to them and the repetitions you have going on are very nice.

You may want to look at that knee a little bit more. With the colors you added to it, it's one of the focus points of your illustration, I'm not sure how you feel about it, but it's a little funky.

I'm curious as to why you did chose to use that blue and red in the leg. Was this done in a later "polishing up" phase of the image, or did you just add it in for effect? I like it either way. Alot of people forget to repeat colors from the surroundings into the main element of the image. This is a good way to help tie in the figure with her surroundings, nice job!
I love the way you only show hints of detail in the dark areas of your images, this leaves it up to us to imagine the rest.
But, in the end, it's the publisher who make the decision of what gets used. I like the second one better, as far as published image, it's not showing us everything and leaves just enough for us to want to see more. Very titillating

[Akolyte]

Ewww...She's pretty ronchy Hehe, awesome pic though. She's like straddling her composite bow. Something about the hairy snatch bothers me though...especially since it's so dark. That's why I like the loincloth one better. Although, it could be darker, and maybe have blood stains on it or something. I'm rambling on, in case you DIDN'T notice. Awesome pic.

[vebjorn]

Thanks Samdragon..knee fix coming up..it looks broken..dang.

I painted this in 1000x1000 since I forgot to scale it up to 2000x2000, actually this res made it look better..brushes flow better in painter at a lower res. Maybe thats why.

-Veb

[Bradford]

Nice image! I didn't make a comment on the previous post, so this is mine. You have a very recognizible(spell) style. Looking forward to your future works.

-Bradford

[vebjorn]

Fixed some more flaws and finished her loincloth. (Yes it was a bit "slapped on in 5 mins")

-Veb