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zthee · Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 3:10 pm

Hello poxen.

Nice image

It looks anatomicly correct. Although he liks kind of stiff. So I think it would be cooler if you drew him in another pose.

And a small comment about the wings. I don't think they look like feathers, but more like palm leafs..

well, keep it up!

//zthee

nightmare · Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 6:51 pm

yes, the wings look kinda funky. well, when u look at a birds wing, theres a joint in the first 3rd of the wing... and the feathers have to be much smaller than that when its close to the connection to the body, kind of like down.... so, lengthen the wings, put a joint in them, make the feathers smaller and rounder at the ends!! it helps if u look at a feather. i'll try to dig up my ugly drawing of an angel i have and see if it helps any.

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nightmare · Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 6:54 pm

ok i found it

its pretty shoddily done but it should help u get an idea... just try to ignore the ugly parts ^^;

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Shadow-X- · Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 7:27 pm

Back in the days... ok ok, so maybe 2 months ago, when I had the time, I was trying to draw an angel, and the wings were a big concern of mine. Take a look at the wings I drew, they might help you, or discourrage you (lol). I think my wings are mediocre anyhoo. Here are some samples, then links to my page

http://www.geocities.com/shadowex/
http://members.nbci.com/shadow2x/

there are a few other pics that i drew, more like doodles, and my pic from the last rave I went to, speaking of which, i get to go to another one in Toronto this saturday. Mmmmm, rave. soo excited. blah blah blah, oh yeah, don't mind the personal pics..

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Snakebyte · Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 8:48 pm

This may or may not help but..

The full image can be found on my site if it will help

poxen · Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 12:23 am

Yo...
Well, back from the dead.
I guess no one missed me...

Well, well i did this sketch, "and I need to know whats wrong and what i can make better" (sounds like a bad song), before i start to color it.
And if anyone have som good pics on angle wings. I whould be happy if you post them here..because these wings are..gahh..!

moah...

cybergod · Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 12:27 am

cool
i all most gona finish aphoto just like this

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poxen · Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 12:37 am

thx cybergod.
ohh..then finsih it and then post it here! =)

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poxen · Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 5:34 am

zthee- thx...yea the pose i kinda boring, but thats to late now.
Hehe, yea palm leavs is the perfect word for them. Thx.

nightmare-ok, i think i got the idee now, really nice wings, exactly what i was looking for..thx!
Shadow-X- Thx, nice sketches. The bird pic relly helps me. Thx!

Snakebyte- wa..nice pic..like the wings form, but they are kinda evil..no?

Thx everyone....will change the wings and when i am satisfied I will try to color it...thx!

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Dives · Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 10:51 am

POXEN wtf have u been ive been searching for you!! That is nice i like your coloring style

Fracis posted this on the forum a while ago.

CapnPyro · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 12:23 am

since it's been overlooked for so long, I'd like to add:

"angle"

AHHAHAAHAHAHAHAH

Phew, k im done. oh yah and id make the feathers smaller, but more rows of them, and wings wider.

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poxen · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 1:40 am

Dives- You been searching for me! wow....=)
Francis really rule...love his pics..I must learn how to ge my pics cleaner...but iam still to sketchy...i just let the pen work all the time, not so much thinking..=)
Thx

CapnPyro-hehe...i have not been notice that..but ok..this is the second angle post ive seen..but i am a big dork so..ok.
and the wings is "not wings" they are palm leafs...=)
thx..

Will sart to color it soon, have fixed the wings..and I will probably post i here today..kepp a look out! =)

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poxen · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 7:00 am

YO!
Well did som changes...pretty fast and it�s kinda rough..but the wings are more "angle" now...i think...

My coloring is NOT the BEST!

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Dives · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 9:17 am

I have one suggestion. Put his arm on top of the hilt. When are you online nowadays?

Enayla · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 9:23 am

I just thought I'd post an image of a wing I did for an archangel. Perhaps it will be of some help. You have improved the image a lot since the first version of it that you posted.

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poxen · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 10:10 am

Dives- Is it Odin! hehe...i havent seen you for a long time..well i am online hmm....20:00- 21:00...most days..
on the hilt...ok..try that..
thx!

Enayla- Wow thats a beatifull wing! nice work man...Helps me ALOT ALOT!
thx!

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Poxin · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 10:45 pm

poxen...poxin

i guess it had to happend sooner or later

daz199 · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 1:04 am

hey poxin......chilliwak...pretty close to surrey eh

poxen · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 1:53 am

poxin....yea...
but we must not hate eachother for that..lets keep it steady..OK!
hehe...

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Atreyu · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 3:00 am

Hi, I think the ribcage ends too high. Feel it on yourself, between the ribcage and the pelvis you can fit your fist barely; he seems to have a bit of space there. Also the neck is a bit long.

kardis · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 10:11 am

surprise you don't have a couple victoria secret catalogue lying around like myself.. ooh the angels!

-kardis

Poxin · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 3:55 pm

hey daz, from the the lowermainland? thats cool

its not so lonly here after all *sniff =P

and poxen im interested about how you came up with that name for i thought i was the only one and i came about this name in a very odd way. would be cool to see what made yah think of it.

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poxen · Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2000 11:52 am

Atreyu- yea...thx for notice...have fixed that now...i think..=)
you have to see for youre self...
thx..

kardis- victoria secret??? dont have that one...

poxin- hehe..tha pox�s
my car has a number plate which says "POX (and some numbers)"
And then i just addes en, POXen..=)
thats the story!
and you? whats yooourre story!

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