[schwinn]

Whipped this out today and thought I would get a little feedback before i started to color. You can see how I struggled on the outside arm and her weight but I think I am pretty close. What do you think?



oh and thanks fatrblossom,

later

[CyberT]

YOU RULE!! I'd Bang her in a second if i could get past that troll! Wait a second, i'm open minded, i'm up for a threesome!

[Spydur]

Very nice.
I can see the prob you are having with the right arm. It seems that her bicep and forearm are trying to go in different directions. Love our beast...he seems happy as hell to be captive!

[EviLToYLeT]

Hell I'd be happy if I was captive by that woman too! And oo look wher ehe is. with his elbow... ok ill shuddup. Very nice picture indeed though. The arm receding.. really doesnt look like a receding arm. You need to make the collar she's holding recede as well. *i think*
[edi]t a dirty way to get it to look like its in the back is just shade it all black like some cartoonisys do... but then again. heh maybe not [/edit] [edit] nother thing is her high heels don't really have an area whey they start. From here looks like thats the shape of her foot[/edit]

[This message has been edited by EviLToYLeT (edited December 06, 2000).]

[This message has been edited by EviLToYLeT (edited December 06, 2000).]

[schwinn]

Ya, the arm is supposed to be receeding into the background. I think I might be able to pull it off with a little shading

later

[Lukias]

Babe with monter gimp!... what a neat idea, put him in leather with a zip face mask.

Nice lines, and generally nice drawing.

You gonna colour this..?

[TheMilkMan]

Very cool man I can't waite to see what you do with it...really like what you did with her figure...good work!

[Dives]

ahh now that is my kind of topic. Luv it.

[Jaymo]

Gorgeous! Go finish...

[Sempere]

I love this one too, but I liked faaar more your awesome "knight runing from 2 monster" you posted some weeks ago...
It was INCREDIBLE!!!

A question:
Your profile work is a 3D artist, but have you some traditional animation background?

Your pencilwork is really good... and the soft colors you applied over that Foxgirl were very well choosen.

I like your style, man!

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If you want check my drawings you have them here:

-Happy people dancing in the moonlight- http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/007419.html

-IronMan - http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/005942.html

I will be very proud reading your comments...

See ya.

[Vortx]

Ummmmm. I like. Very sexy in deed.

This will look cool w/ some simple colors...almost graphic like.

One small comment tho: her angles seem just a bit skinny...and they are holding up a lot of weight. She also looks a bit un-balanced. Her inner leg should probably lean forward a bit and end up behind the monster.

Good work. Can't wait for the colored version. My window's background is waiting..

=)

-feng

[Maruman]

haha i love the look on the trolls face. great pic!!! :-) mm finish it up.. mmm *drools*

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[TheMilkMan]

God I would love to see spooge do an over paint on that....!!!!!!!

[shardik]

haha milkman, thats exactly what i was thinking!!!

[Johnny Inc]

I have no problem with the right arm, it seems to work well with her head's position. I think the right breast might be positioned a little too low in relation to where her shoulder blades would align. If you follow the right arm back to the spot where it would meet her body, you'd see it lines up with the left shoulder blade. So her breast would line up the same.

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Killing time is my business and business is good.

[kardis]

oh go get yourself a real girlfriend you lil weirdos! surprise visigoth didnt post, hes the worst of 'em all methink

oh yeah, very nice pic.. hope to see the colored version soon

-kardis