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Topic : "[crit] Necromancer (an almost finished piece)" |
WitchLord junior member
Member # Joined: 23 May 2000 Posts: 40 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 1:06 pm |
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This is my first piece with a complete scene and not just a character. I'm quite proud of it so far.
I would like to hear what you guys and gals think of it. Is there any major flaws that needs to be fixed?
I believe I have found a style of painting that I'm comfortable with. I have worked on this image for about 3-4 hours spread out over the last week, I'll probably finish it this weekend. Speed is important to me as I don't have much time and quickly loose my patience if time drags out too much.
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 1:11 pm |
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This is really cool. Great lighting on this one - the green colour makes it look very eerie.
If I have some complain, even the smallest one, it would be that the necromancer looks a little bit short. But who's to say necromancers can't be short?
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Delucubus member
Member # Joined: 12 Oct 2000 Posts: 127 Location: Chico, CA
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 1:26 pm |
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Ok, I think it looks great, I also especially like the green. First thing i noticed was his right leg. It looked weird at first but the more I looked at it the more it looked like his leg was just bent. |
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WitchLord junior member
Member # Joined: 23 May 2000 Posts: 40 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 1:40 pm |
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Thanks guys (edit: oops, I forgot that you are a girl, Enayla )! It's really appreciated
Yeah the necromancer is short, although that's mainly because he's old and crooked
Delucubus, I think the main reason the leg looks weird is that I haven't really succeeded with the folds of the fabric. I think I'll give it another try after work tomorrow.
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Sigurd2000 junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Dec 2000 Posts: 14 Location: San Diego ,CA
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 1:52 pm |
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Great pic so far. I love the dark fealing, you've got that down I think. Just a couple of things. Maybe bring out more levels of darkness to give more dimention to the work. Also, the work is just a bit too fuzzy for me. Maybe define the lines a bit more. Overall a killer work and your not even done. Good job!
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Jerry member
Member # Joined: 28 Oct 2000 Posts: 306 Location: Canada, Ontario
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 7:17 pm |
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I like the theme on this one.
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WitchLord junior member
Member # Joined: 23 May 2000 Posts: 40 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 2:23 am |
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Thanks guys!!
Sigurd, I'm not sure what you mean with more levels of darkness. Could you explain it to me?
Yes, I know the work is fuzzy. This is the new way of drawing that I like. Previously I used to paint each part of the picture in full detail before moving on to the next part. But after reading advice from many people on this board I've been trying to instead paint the entire picture as fast as possible and not spend so much time on the details. Once that is done I'll go back and refine the details that need it. This is very good as you spot your mistakes before you have spend a lot of time on them and it isn't so frustrating fixing the errors. It's also a lot more fun to paint this way when you can see the direction the painting is going. If you don't already paint this way I suggest you try it yourself.
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cybergod member
Member # Joined: 29 Nov 2000 Posts: 173 Location: isr
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Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 3:30 am |
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good work
this is aDIABLO image not?!?!
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WitchLord junior member
Member # Joined: 23 May 2000 Posts: 40 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 4:26 am |
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No, I didn't have Diablo in mind when I did this painting. I intend to use it as a frontpage for my homepage, though it's not exactly a witchlord.
Besides the necromancer in Diablo 2 was not old and crooked, and he didn't wear a cape. Or were you thinking of the Wanderer (Diablo)? He didn't summon the creatures, they just appeared around him.
Can you tell that I'm a fan of Diablo? I'm really looking forward to the expansion.
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Sigurd2000 junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Dec 2000 Posts: 14 Location: San Diego ,CA
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Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 3:27 pm |
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I guess I mean you may need to work up the dif from light to dark more. It had a bit of a flat feal to it. That just may be because your not done with it
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Spectra member
Member # Joined: 11 Nov 2000 Posts: 135 Location: Montreal, Quebec, Canada
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Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 4:03 pm |
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Its really cool, I like the "3d effect" of your shading, the guy has volume.
Finish it!
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CyberArtist member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 1999 Posts: 284 Location: Fort Lauderdale, FL
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 12:22 am |
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The upper half of the guy looks really nice... but it is a bit blurry.
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