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SporQ
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be vewy vewy quiet...
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sprout
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| Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2000 9:45 pm |
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looking good... I have a few things that bother me about it... but I dunno if you're looking for critiques?
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| Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2000 10:08 pm |
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i'm always looking for critiques 
and i just noticed the lop-sided eye, hehe
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| Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 1:00 am |
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cool picture, it looks like he's standing still, bolt up right. it'd be more more neat (pardon my lack of descriptive words) if it looked like he was hunched over or.. doing something. maybe put in his shoulders and back like hes leaning down or something. neat color scheme. probably wouldnt be worth it to modify this one, but on the next one try somethin actioney
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| Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2000 8:30 am |
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| well not quit what i expected. Hmm well i guess he COULD be a ranger. Nice work anyway. |
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| Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 12:48 am |
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thanks for the comments.
what i would like is if somebody could critique the form, technique, composition; as opposed to the anatomy and such. i really need to learn form and how shapes indicate form, is why i ask.
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