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di_fuse junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Sep 2000 Posts: 18 Location: west covina ca USA
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 4:45 pm |
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this is a character im trying to develop. could you guys give me some suggestions.
Di-Fuse
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Frost member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 2662 Location: Montr�al, Canada
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 5:29 pm |
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That's nice Di_Fuse! Nice style. The clothing and all looks old... what I find strange is that he looks a bit mixed with anime style (face). =) |
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Flexible Elf member
Member # Joined: 01 Aug 2000 Posts: 642 Location: Parker, CO
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 5:53 pm |
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Thats great di_fuse. I likes it. Only thing I'm not too keen on are the ears but I really dig the style you've got going on. Color that puppy!
-Flexible Elf
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marc_taro member
Member # Joined: 27 Sep 2000 Posts: 128 Location: Boston
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 6:27 pm |
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I'd make the hands bigger, and cut the coat up into color areas. If the trim is to be a different color than the fabric, make the trim wider - you need clear zones of color, otherwise this character is going to look split in half at the waist. Is the hair black? Then draw the highlights - anime hair has to be very grahic, but not flat. Agree? |
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Darkmoon member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 279 Location: Atlanta. GA.
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 6:33 pm |
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wow that looks awsome hehe i love the ears and the expression hehe like
"yeah, my ears stick out 2 feet from my head, what do YOU care..."
i think the buttons should go up higher on the coat, right now it kinda looks a little off, but thats probably just me, personal opinion.
colour it! hehe
-Lisa
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Shadow-X- member
Member # Joined: 29 Oct 1999 Posts: 259 Location: Formerly Ontario,Canada, Now Vancouver, B.C, CANADA, where people hate the Toronto Maple Leafs
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 6:39 pm |
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I love it. Its great. Do you happen to be JapanesE? I know that you don't have to be japanese to draw anime style, but I havent found many cartoons that the americans have made so far (Penny Arcade is an exception, I love that, but because its funny, i dont like their new style). I like your anime style (repetitive yet ??). I wish I could draw like that.... I cant even draw like that and I'm japanese...
Heh, nice job nontheless!
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Rinaldo member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2000 Posts: 1367 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 7:25 pm |
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I like it a lot. nice lines!
Sorry no suggestions . |
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Isric member
Member # Joined: 23 Jul 2000 Posts: 1200 Location: Calgary AB
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 8:57 pm |
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I dig the style of the face, I would just give him a long coat. Vampires need long flowning coats. |
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egerie member
Member # Joined: 30 Jul 2000 Posts: 693 Location: Montreal, Canada
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 9:07 pm |
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Nice looks on this guy...
Actually I kind of like the small hands and fingernails. This character makes me think of an evil child. Ageless, far more inteligent for his age, his youth (?) being a mask.. Scary idea but somehow I like it
The shoes seem out of place tho. Are you working on giving him a classical (17th century) look ?
um I ought to sleep a bit more.. delirious rambling |
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ThE_JacO junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Jul 2000 Posts: 37 Location: Milano
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2000 7:30 am |
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LOVE IT
i'd just change a bit the hands (a tad larger) and maybe set a slightly different pose (maybe brak the vertical balance putting his right arm bent and the hand with a thumb in a pocket).
definitively deserves some colouring and a pinup like framing of some sort |
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di_fuse junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Sep 2000 Posts: 18 Location: west covina ca USA
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2000 8:24 am |
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hey thanx guys for feedbak, much appreciated.
oh yeah about the buttons...thanx about giving me ideas for the button on his coat. yeah i think his hand could also neeed more volume.
about the colouring...uh im not really good at it, which program do you guys think is better to paint with.
Photoshop or Painter???
actually i'm so suppose to build him the computer but i got lazy..
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phisi junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Dec 2000 Posts: 23 Location: oth, germany
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:42 pm |
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nice work, looks kewl |
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phisi junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Dec 2000 Posts: 23 Location: oth, germany
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:43 pm |
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blood thirsty vampire |
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phisi junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Dec 2000 Posts: 23 Location: oth, germany
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:44 pm |
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*g* |
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egerie member
Member # Joined: 30 Jul 2000 Posts: 693 Location: Montreal, Canada
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:57 pm |
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*looks around for the Damocles sword* |
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A.Buttle member
Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:30 pm |
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You stupid twat, phisi.
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:44 pm |
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Hahahaha... |
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OreoX junior member
Member # Joined: 30 Nov 2000 Posts: 19 Location: TX
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:54 pm |
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quote: Originally posted by di_fuse:
this is a character im trying to develop. could you guys give me some suggestions.
Di-Fuse
very very good, but get rid of the mr. grinch fingers
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Flexible Elf member
Member # Joined: 01 Aug 2000 Posts: 642 Location: Parker, CO
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Dives member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 392 Location: Finland
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Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2000 9:25 am |
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isn't that an old picture? i rememeber seeing it somewhere 2-3 months ago. |
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