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di_fuse
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 4:45 pm     Reply with quote
this is a character im trying to develop. could you guys give me some suggestions.

Di-Fuse

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Frost
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 5:29 pm     Reply with quote
That's nice Di_Fuse! Nice style. The clothing and all looks old... what I find strange is that he looks a bit mixed with anime style (face). =)
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Flexible Elf
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 5:53 pm     Reply with quote
Thats great di_fuse. I likes it. Only thing I'm not too keen on are the ears but I really dig the style you've got going on. Color that puppy!

-Flexible Elf

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marc_taro
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 6:27 pm     Reply with quote
I'd make the hands bigger, and cut the coat up into color areas. If the trim is to be a different color than the fabric, make the trim wider - you need clear zones of color, otherwise this character is going to look split in half at the waist. Is the hair black? Then draw the highlights - anime hair has to be very grahic, but not flat. Agree?
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Darkmoon
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 6:33 pm     Reply with quote
wow that looks awsome hehe i love the ears and the expression hehe like
"yeah, my ears stick out 2 feet from my head, what do YOU care..."

i think the buttons should go up higher on the coat, right now it kinda looks a little off, but thats probably just me, personal opinion.

colour it! hehe

-Lisa
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Shadow-X-
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 6:39 pm     Reply with quote
I love it. Its great. Do you happen to be JapanesE? I know that you don't have to be japanese to draw anime style, but I havent found many cartoons that the americans have made so far (Penny Arcade is an exception, I love that, but because its funny, i dont like their new style). I like your anime style (repetitive yet ??). I wish I could draw like that.... I cant even draw like that and I'm japanese...
Heh, nice job nontheless!
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Rinaldo
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 7:25 pm     Reply with quote
I like it a lot. nice lines!

Sorry no suggestions .
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Isric
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 8:57 pm     Reply with quote
I dig the style of the face, I would just give him a long coat. Vampires need long flowning coats.
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egerie
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2000 9:07 pm     Reply with quote
Nice looks on this guy...
Actually I kind of like the small hands and fingernails. This character makes me think of an evil child. Ageless, far more inteligent for his age, his youth (?) being a mask.. Scary idea but somehow I like it

The shoes seem out of place tho. Are you working on giving him a classical (17th century) look ?

um I ought to sleep a bit more.. delirious rambling
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ThE_JacO
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 28, 2000 7:30 am     Reply with quote
LOVE IT
i'd just change a bit the hands (a tad larger) and maybe set a slightly different pose (maybe brak the vertical balance putting his right arm bent and the hand with a thumb in a pocket).
definitively deserves some colouring and a pinup like framing of some sort
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di_fuse
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 28, 2000 8:24 am     Reply with quote
hey thanx guys for feedbak, much appreciated.
oh yeah about the buttons...thanx about giving me ideas for the button on his coat. yeah i think his hand could also neeed more volume.

about the colouring...uh im not really good at it, which program do you guys think is better to paint with.
Photoshop or Painter???

actually i'm so suppose to build him the computer but i got lazy..

Di-Fuse
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phisi
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:42 pm     Reply with quote
nice work, looks kewl
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:43 pm     Reply with quote
blood thirsty vampire
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phisi
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:44 pm     Reply with quote
*g*
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egerie
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:57 pm     Reply with quote
*looks around for the Damocles sword*
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:30 pm     Reply with quote
You stupid twat, phisi.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:44 pm     Reply with quote
Hahahaha...
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OreoX
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:54 pm     Reply with quote
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Originally posted by di_fuse:
this is a character im trying to develop. could you guys give me some suggestions.

Di-Fuse



very very good, but get rid of the mr. grinch fingers

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Flexible Elf
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 10:05 pm     Reply with quote
Wasn't this posted a long time ago? I know I've seen this picture before.

Cool pic anyway.

-Flexible Elf

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Dives
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 06, 2000 9:25 am     Reply with quote
isn't that an old picture? i rememeber seeing it somewhere 2-3 months ago.
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