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PuckDewd
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I did this for the umm thing we aren't supposed to talk about, however, I was hoping to get some crits on it.
Let me know what you think.
-Puck
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 4:36 pm |
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Totally flaming, dude...
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So...which part of "get out of town freak" weren't you clear on, John?
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PuckDewd
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| Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 7:04 pm |
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bump for crits
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synj
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| Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 7:05 pm |
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| looks like the fire's winning to me eheh |
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jHof
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| Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 7:32 pm |
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Looks like the faces of the man is just an image you painted over. It doesn't line up to well. You prolly couldn't find the right angled image to line up the direction of the face eh?
His left arm seems a bit long, or it't something else. Some proportion thing is bug'n my eye.
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PuckDewd
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| Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 7:43 pm |
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jHof, thanks for the crit, but I hate to disappoint you. It's all mine. I agree there are probs with it (left arm being one of them), but that is the whole reason for posting it for crits, so others can see probs that I may have overlooked.
-Puck
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added a fullsize closeup of the face for jHof
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PuckDewd
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 2:38 pm |
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Last attempt to get crits before I let it go into the Sijun graveyard.
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sprout
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| Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2000 2:45 am |
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about the face... it's looking straight at us, while the head has almost a 3/4 view... you might want to try to tweak that a little bit...
here is a drawover of how I think the top of the face shield should go...
maybe my domain will be back up soon... and you'll be able to see it... *shrug*
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