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Francis · Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 11:54 am

Just farting around this morning. Straight into Pshop, no scanned pencil. As you can probably tell. Crits welcome.

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Ragnarok · Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 11:59 am

Awesome! Looks very neat. At first her right eye looked a bit strange, but it's under a hard spot of light, so it's ok.

surferboi · Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 1:32 pm

Francis this looks really great.. u could polish it up and make a poster out of it for a movie... Only thing is i dont remember catwoman having breasts that looked like that...

nice job
cya

Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

surferboi: have you seen her comic? They are pretty huge. Jim Balent was the artist that drew em that way.

Like two midgets in a headlock.

Them there are some big sweater monkeys.

Ok.. I'll stop.. hehe.

Solitaire · Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 2:13 pm

Francis, I like the pic, but do you know the song "crosseyed Mary" (hint

) - imo sth is wrong with her right eye; I don't know exactly what it is - the glare or the whole positioning, but sth's wrong...

Do you use a Wacom?

Gecko · Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 3:09 pm

I like this one a lot, and the brushstrokes are very spoogeish in the blue areas. The lighting is nice and background works well with it.

The shadow crossing vertically through her face is a little weird, though. Not quite sure how to correct it, but I'd think it should follow the roundness of the cheek more.

Another thing is the leftover black outlines, those really destroy the otherwise good-looking pic. If nothing else, just get rid of them and it'll look very good.

That's all.

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[Shizo] · member Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938

WOWW MAAAN!!!!! WHAT A HUGE BOOB RIGHT THERE

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A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

I'm with [Shizo].

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Shadow · Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 4:28 pm

I'm with [Stupid].. err [Shizo] also HEHE

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kos.mandis · Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 6:31 pm

Sweeeeet, fart some more of this man

Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

Pretty cool Francis. You are getting really good at drawing in PS. The lighting kinda bugs me in this pic though. Looks pretty extreme. I would think that it widen and disperse a little more past the nose towards the bottom. Do you think it would keep the dark contrast and curve in like that?

Frost · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 12:14 am

Very nice work Francis! Guess you no longer need to pencil for photoshop images, this turned out very very well!

burn0ut · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 12:16 am

looks great, the lighting is awesome, reminds me of somethin spooge would do, only things that stick out are the black outlines on her lips, and her arm seems a bit small.

good job

The Dude · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 4:44 am

Nice work (AS USUAL)...the brush strokes
are kind of spooge-esk, or if they aren't
painterly are they spoogerly? Where is the
spooge man any-who? I'm kind of rambling...
anyways nice pic man, how 'bout a whole scene?

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elam · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 7:28 am

uhhh. Her breast is about as big as her head...
elam

Jaymo · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 7:45 am

Meeeeowww!! Make that suit more shiny.

Francis · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 8:55 am

Hi, thanks for all the tips. There definitely were a lot of rough spots with this. I tried refining the shapes a bit and losing the linework - that was a good call, as was the hard edge of the shadow sort of not following the contour of the face. I don't know if I necessarily corrected it in this version, but at least it's not as obvious. And she was a bit cross eyed. No good.

And actually I wasn't consciously trying to imitate Spooge, but I think there is some of that influence creeping in.

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Francis · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 8:58 am

Oh yeah, and the giant boobie stays. Chapel, you're hilarious.

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Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

That looks great Francis. But you are missing one little thing. I imagine you are drawing this after the comic book version? Should she have some hair flowing around there? Looks good regardless.

Joachim · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 9:10 am

nice one francis ! nice boobie

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Solitaire · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 10:17 am

ahh, that's better! Was a good suggestion to clear the outlines.

[Shizo] · member Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938

Eveybody vote to make that boobie BIGGER!!!!!

WE WANT A BIGGER BOOBIE!!
*common kids! repea after me!*
WEEE WAANNT A BIGGER BOOBIES!!

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Gecko · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 1:40 pm

Just in case you're still working on this, it's a lot better now, as is the vertical shadow.
The cross-eyedness didn't really bother me, but now that I look again, her left eye looks half-blind because of the soft gray cover, also softening the black mask outlines with darker blue would look more natural.
Her nose seems to be a bit off perspective as well.

Still, very nice.

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Haha yeah I remember Catwoman being stacked...hee hee

Nice job, Francis

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