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bj91x member
Member # Joined: 24 Nov 2000 Posts: 90 Location: Fullerton, South Cali
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 1:59 am |
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I couldn't think up of a good background, so I just put together whatever. I know it's not the greatest thing to do, but I've been thinking for almost an hour without being able to come up with an idea for a good bg.
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Ko member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2000 Posts: 457 Location: Aarhus, Denmark
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 2:05 am |
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The lensflare, the damnable lensflare.... avert your eyes children!!! It hurts so much...
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bj91x member
Member # Joined: 24 Nov 2000 Posts: 90 Location: Fullerton, South Cali
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 2:13 am |
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Um... I guess that means you don't like the lens flare??? O...kay...?
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Ko member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2000 Posts: 457 Location: Aarhus, Denmark
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 4:35 am |
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It's not that I don't like the pic... just not the flare
You seem mostly to use midtones and highlights, try to add more depth by using deeper shadows! Especially the suit and hair look flat. The lightsource seems undefined this way.
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JLunar junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Nov 2000 Posts: 29
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 6:53 am |
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aaaaaaaarrrghh... noooooo... lens flare....
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bj, no lens flare. it bad, bad, bad.
for the bg, why don't you keep her in space, and just have her standing on top of the space station? Like in stage two where she battles her rival for the first time?
or keep her in the space station?
and yes, I agree w/ko on the deeper shadows.. it'll maker her more contoured. the easy way is to select ulala and play with the brightness/contrast or the curves. try playing with the curves first so that it's a down curve on the left and an up curve on the right. very small bumps, if this makes any sense to you.
Very cute Ulala. :) melikes.
Jen :)
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Jaymo member
Member # Joined: 14 Sep 2000 Posts: 498 Location: Saarbr�cken, Germany
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 8:00 am |
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Nice babe! Just the shading looks very flat, put some shadows in there. And put her on her toes; like this the pose looks odd, IMO. That must be some tight suit...are her hands covered with that, too? It looks like skin. |
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