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Periadam · Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 8:39 pm

Haven't been able to finish anything in a while, and I think this one might need a little more work. But it's mostly done if not completely, and it's too late to do any more on it tonight.

I thought it looked a little sparse on the right side. Ideas anyone?

So enjoy, pick it apart if you like, but be kind

Thanks.

-Peri

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 8:44 pm

I like it. But the body of the front horse looks a bit odd. I think you need to add a bit more white areas where the light hits to better define the form and muscles. But anyways I like it... And if the stuff that's coming up is dust.. why is that the only area that has it? There should be a bit of dust behind the horses and a bit on the fromnt legs as they kick forward... I think. But i really like the mood to this picture. Btw, the light should be a bit more goldish on the horses.
[btw, the right side looks fine... you might want to cut off a bit of the bottom of the cloud and perhapsshow another hill with ihlloutes of otehr horses.]

[This message has been edited by EviLToYLeT (edited December 02, 2000).]

Dryfire · Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 8:48 pm

Nice man, i liek the mood too. Try and add a highlight on the horses back though, it would help a lot. and make the horses right um leg muscles a little smaller, its out of proportion.

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Gecko · Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 4:03 pm

Whoa!

You're getting way too few replies for such quality work. The bright (and good-looking!) sky really brings out the silhouettes, and the composition makes it wallpaper material. If this was not your intention, you should consider cropping some of the sky area on the top and right side away to better concentrate on the horses. Besides that, I wouldn't touch it much. Well captured movement, and the sky, if it was any darker near the ground, would almost look like dust raised by the horses running.

First of all, I disagree with the horses' legs being out of proportion. The only thing that I'm not quite sure about is the length of their backs, but for all I know they might be correct as well.

Lovely!

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Silico · member Member # Joined: 25 Nov 1999 Posts: 178

that looks really neat, periadam!! i especially like the way you made the horses look like they were in motion r something, it looks super surreal and gives me a peaceful feeling.

i get how you could think of it as sparse, but i guess not everything has to be loaded with things to look at, i think you did a very good job at completing this work of art!

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CyberLink · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 4:27 am

That looks very nice. I love such colors and mood

The Dude · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 4:30 am

Really beautiful pic...I have to agree with
everyone that the mood is just wonderful.

Was this done in painter?

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eetu · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 5:28 am

yeah surreal is the word. beautiful.

eetu.

Frost · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 6:13 am

Wow! Very nice Periadam!

Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

Gecko is right.. not enough replies.

This is a really great picture. I love the colors. The dust being kicked up the kinda stands out, but its no biggie. As far as balancing out the right side... I think it would be neat if there was a little hint of a mountain range over there. Most excellent work dude!

Jaymo · Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 7:36 am

Definitely nice work! And errrrrr...no idea for the right side. Maybe something they are running from...fire? The mummy? Just leave it as is...