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Delucubus
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:45 pm     Reply with quote
Ok, i put this away for a while but I would really like some comments. Possibly about the form. Yes, i did use dodge and burn. With this picture i really wanted to focus more on the body and not the painting (muscles, highlights, shadows, etc.)

Please tear it apart.

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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:50 pm     Reply with quote
Heh. I dont know my anatomy eitehr. but It seems that the chest area is well done. The legs look abit funny because the kneecaps aren't really that apparent.. but anyway, I think your off to a great start on the pic. Study anatomy on your free time.but make sure to finish the pic off and experiment with tecniques/brushes etc.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:54 pm     Reply with quote
I like that mountinous background, though it clashes with his uh... *Thong* but I kindof like the quick strokes of snow on the mountain esp that far left one...

Joel Loukus
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galen
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 8:16 pm     Reply with quote
don't avoid drawing feet, because once you start down that path, it gets easier and easier to just "not do it" than actually try making them...

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or you can dream of the frog legs sitting in the church, with the glass and the sand by my footsteps
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Delucubus
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 12:58 am     Reply with quote
Hey thanks for the responses.

EilToylet: Ya, the knees have always looked a little funny, I have a couple pictures i'm using as reference but the knees are just keep giving me trouble.

Loukus: this was just a quick background i'm probably going to change it so he's completely in the forest or he's on top of a mountain.

galen: my original idea was to have him standing in a swamp and so his feet would be hidden. I wasn't intentionaly avoiding drawing his feet but you got a point.
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