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Delucubus member
Member # Joined: 12 Oct 2000 Posts: 127 Location: Chico, CA
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:45 pm |
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Ok, i put this away for a while but I would really like some comments. Possibly about the form. Yes, i did use dodge and burn. With this picture i really wanted to focus more on the body and not the painting (muscles, highlights, shadows, etc.)
Please tear it apart.
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EviLToYLeT member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2000 Posts: 1216 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:50 pm |
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Heh. I dont know my anatomy eitehr. but It seems that the chest area is well done. The legs look abit funny because the kneecaps aren't really that apparent.. but anyway, I think your off to a great start on the pic. Study anatomy on your free time.but make sure to finish the pic off and experiment with tecniques/brushes etc. |
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Loukus member
Member # Joined: 29 Oct 2000 Posts: 207 Location: Glen Burnie, MD US of A
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:54 pm |
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I like that mountinous background, though it clashes with his uh... *Thong* but I kindof like the quick strokes of snow on the mountain esp that far left one...
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galen member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2000 Posts: 172 Location: a computer.
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Delucubus member
Member # Joined: 12 Oct 2000 Posts: 127 Location: Chico, CA
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 12:58 am |
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Hey thanks for the responses.
EilToylet: Ya, the knees have always looked a little funny, I have a couple pictures i'm using as reference but the knees are just keep giving me trouble.
Loukus: this was just a quick background i'm probably going to change it so he's completely in the forest or he's on top of a mountain.
galen: my original idea was to have him standing in a swamp and so his feet would be hidden. I wasn't intentionaly avoiding drawing his feet but you got a point. |
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