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[STF]Specter
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 Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 5:29 am |
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Hi,
im new to digital arts but visited this forum for some time now. I was so damn impressed so I had to say: try that for yourself!! So here it is, a drawing of my girlfriend, so i hope to get some feedback from you guys.
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kermitt
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 8:48 am |
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| hey nice drawing... few things though. the right side of her face looks weird. It looks as if there isn't a cheek bone or structure there. I really like the nose. but the chin seems twisted twoards the viewer. all in all its a great start..Way to Go!! |
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 4:14 pm |
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Is there a reference photo to look at?
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So...which part of "get out of town freak" weren't you clear on, John?
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jasonN
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 7:45 pm |
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The skin tones are looking nice at the moment and the diretion you're headed seems good too. But I can't really crit the structure or form unless you post up a reference pic. (translation = post the pic for more replies!)
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 9:17 pm |
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| *nod* *nod8 we need the reference! (we don't want to make comments against your girlfriend) Anyway, one suggestion is darker shadows, brighter highlights. Black hair usually should have really snice highlights ..unless is some murky lighting. |
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amnesia
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 11:56 pm |
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Want us to crit your girlfriend? Or the painting of her?  |
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[STF]Specter
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| Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2000 12:21 am |
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| Thanx for your reply, I'm happy that at least one of you guys gives me some feedback. |
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PaK-RaT
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| Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2000 12:35 am |
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ooooooh, meeeeeeean!
hehhe but funny none the less |
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