[Tiger Eaten]

"The force is all around us. It binds us. It turns us purple." speaketh Yoda [Cut scene from Empire Strikes Back] :P

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ROAR! CHOMP! MUNCH! (You've been Tiger Eaten!)

[This message has been edited by Tiger Eaten (edited November 28, 2000).]

[This message has been edited by Tiger Eaten (edited November 28, 2000).]

[Axl]

I like the colour scheme you've decided to use, very moody against the black bg.
I've noticed a few things that could be wrong with the pose.
Firstly, to me the head looks as though it's too far to the left. If you look at the where the collar is on his right shoulder the right side of his face should be more inline with it.
Secondly, his right forearm looks disjointed from the upper arm. I think that if you take out the black line and join the upper and lower arm this will eliminate the disjointed look.
Hope all that makes sense.

[sacrelicious]

The force is not light or dark... it is purple.

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mmm... sacrelicious

[Matt Elder]

hmmmm... starwars. This is a very nice piccy and the colours are pretty cool. The thing that struck me about this image was the 'rubbery-ness' of the jacket and the shirt. This may be intentional or not but something you might want to look at if you want to make the character look a little more 'real'.

The fingers on the hand holding the light sabre are too small. Look at the size of the palm of the hand and then the fingers. The right leg also looks a little funny as it is too straight. I would try to have the lower half of the leg a little more vertical with the foot pointing directly to the left hand side of the page (not to the lower left hand corner as you have now).

Also the left foot looks like it is curved to the left a little bit too much and looks very painful. try to have it pointing more to the viewer.

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See ya on da flip side
Matt
http://www.mattelder.com