[Rhomb]

Something I whipped up yesterday with painter. I think there are some(many) glitches in anatomy and perspective. What say you?




I had this one up few days ago. Like the guy above she isn't the most sensitive person around but I'd still like to hear some more comments on her too.

-Ville


[This message has been edited by Rhomb (edited November 25, 2000).]

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[Bubonic]

nice job, i really like the girl with the gun, i like her hair, and her pose is really good. reminds me a lil bit of travis charest's style

[EviLToYLeT]

HRmm.... I aint too great on my anatomy. But i think that the hips on the 2nd girl are a bit wide and also on the first guy, the foot thats closer looks a bit off balance and awkward. But I really like your black and white style

[Rhomb]

Bubonic: Thank you. Who is this Travis Charest guy? Is there any sites where I could see his work? I'd really like to see it.
EviLToYLeT: Thanks for the comments. Well I tried to do more natural looking body but I guess the upper part(arms) clashes a bit with the lower part of the body.
Yeah, I really had difficulties with that guy's foot and obviously it still shows.

[Rhomb]

I know the forum is moving fast so I'm just buying more time here.

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[Cos]

Hey Rhomb, Very cool pieces! I love the look of the bottom character. Would be great to
see you develop her some more..

To offer some crit

I think on both the pics maybe think more about where the lightsourcing is coming from and
try and exxagerate that some more..

first one,

Something about the guy is looking a lil stiff right now, might be good to loosen
his pose up abit so he is less rigid.

His chest is looking a very square and detached, if you put some more white
to make the shoulder connect to the chest more and give it a little more shape, it
should flow better...

His left leg is maybe a little big, either that or try make his calf from knee
to foot smaller cause it is looking a lil too exxag.

His left arm looks like it starts from too high a point, try lower it and then shorten
his forearm to make the perspective on his hand look more correct.

second one,

I like this one as it is, just maybe the arms are a little unclear like whether she is
wearing something or not. I think it might because there isnt that clear a lightsource..

hope any of this helps

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-Cos Koniotis-

http://www.3dpalette.org/~coskoniotis

[Rhomb]

Hey Cos, many good pointers there. Thanks a lot, man. I'll try to work more on the things you mentioned.

-Ville

[KNau]

For the record, if I were you I wouldn't change the body shape of the woman at all. She's much more realistic now than the typical "warrior babe" illustration. Very cyberpunk vibe.

The actual illustration of the orky-guy-whip dude is fine I just think his pose is a little stiff. It's hard to detect in which direction the motion is flowing. I can't explain it very well but you should be able to draw a line along your character and actually trace the flow of motion. Can anyone explain this technique better?

[Rhomb]

Thanks for commenting KNau. Don't worry, I'm not going to change her body type. Still that doesn't mean I'm not open for every kind of crits and opinions.
I think I know what you mean by this "line of action"... yep, should've thought more of that.