Sijun Forums :: View topic - sketch-game concept

WICKED · Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2000 11:46 pm

well i was kind of affraid to post but i have to learn some how, so plese critic me with all your force, i feel thats the way to learn. I see alot of things wrong with it myself. The anatomy is way off i know but im new at this and dont have any anatomy reference yet. Head is to small, also got cut when scanned. and you know all those other bad things i did lol. I didnt shade cause i was gonna attempt to color it. ok enough talking

thanks,
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btw this is just for concept and im the wort artist lol.

WICKED · Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 12:22 am

anyone?
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Jerry · Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 12:23 am

his head is way bigger than his head other than that... no comment

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WICKED · Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 12:32 am

im guessing your talking about the one his holding.
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[Shizo] · member Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938

LOL!!!!!!!!
NICE!!!!!!!111111!!!!!!(!)

But MAYBE you should forget eveyrthing about weapons, blood, and gore, and learn to draw separate objects first..

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Jezebel · Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 11:40 am

To get an idea of how the anatomy in the picture should look, go grab a decapitated head and look in the mirror while standing in that position. The way the sword is being held looks somewhat unnatural. Once again, stand in the mirror holding an object in that way and ask yourself if that's the way you'd really be holding it. For me it's quite uncomfortable and it has a "forced" feeling.

You might also wanna study up on drawing heads, it's seems as though your head is a combination between a profile and a 3/4 view. You gotta stick with one or the other =)

How old are ya WICKED? Just curious.

-Beth

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WICKED · Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 4:25 pm

i still need someones head how am i gonna look at myself in the mirror if i dont have a head in my hand. lol
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nightmare · Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 4:44 pm

put a basketball in a stretchy sock and hold that

or u can just pretend ur holding something and then work on the decapitated head later. and fix those arms. thats not what muscles look like

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WICKED · Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 4:47 pm

lol thats gonna have to be one big sock.

. yeah those lines i just put to make it seem like theres muscles but i had no clue what went were. Im not that muscular.
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WICKED · Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2000 12:49 am

lol can i borrow one of your heads for this project? hehe.
thanks for the help guys.

Sage: thanks for the link. man does it have alot of stuff

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Jezebel: yeah i see what you mean with the different profiles in the head, its just a prob i have when i dont look at something for reference it all comes up messed up. Maybe i should just learn picasso hehe.
As for you question im 17 and a bad artist hehe.

thanks againg guys,
once my friend returns my sketch book to me im gonna redraw this guy.
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