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silber
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 9:15 am     Reply with quote
wanted to improve my coloring skills
so I made a simple sketch in PS and colored it



here the original size:
http://www.geocities.com/silber_atariflys/knighthead-big.jpg

crits and comments are welcome
thx


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 9:17 am     Reply with quote
umm i dont see an image just a red X heh, maybe you haven't uploaded it yet, i was kinda quick to post
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 9:18 am     Reply with quote
Whoo ok i see it now! not bad , i like the feel of pastels good work

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Dives
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 9:28 am     Reply with quote
nice but try making a sensitive picture. I DARE YOU!!
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 11:48 am     Reply with quote
Dives:
sensitive? -well this pic was done for practice
when I get better in digital art I will do more ''sensitive''pictures


some crits on the coloring would be nice

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 11:57 am     Reply with quote
nice! Pass me an email how you achieve this painted looking technique plz...

these paint techniques in PS are a mystery to me
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 12:26 am     Reply with quote
I see! an egyptian in European armor...
wait a sec.....

Hehe good picture, god knows it's better than anything I do.
I like his little neck cloth thingie under the armor...
JL
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2000 1:35 am     Reply with quote
eeeeeeeeek the second page

can't give me someone hints or crits on my coloring?-pleeeaasseee .

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 12:52 am     Reply with quote
Feines Bildwerk!
I think the shadows in the face are midtones all the way; try to darken the deep shadows a lot more to give it some more contrast (like in the pupil, earlobe, nose etc.). Also you might want to vary the saturation, color and specularity on certain parts a little more(nosetip, chin...).
just my 2 pfennig
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 11:53 am     Reply with quote
I like the pastel texture to it, quite nice.

Is it just me, or does the face seem a bit misaligned? Maybe it's just the way the shadows are working, but it seems that the mouth, nose, and eye brows are all slightly crocked (the nose especially -- that's mostly what is throwing me off I think). Although as you said, your intent was more aimed at coloring. Like Jaymo said, work on the highs and lows a bit more and maybe the rest of it will come together -- make the nose have more depth -- right now it just looks completely vertical, not much of a slope to it at all.
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