[Bubonic]

This is a portrait of some girl i found on www.bikini.com that site has some good reference pics.. I noticed that i drew her head more on a tilt than i should have.. Please take time to crit my work, I love all kinds of critiscm, it can only help me. Thanks in advance.. well, here it is..



Here is the Actual pic..




[This message has been edited by Bubonic (edited November 25, 2000).]

[This message has been edited by Bubonic (edited November 25, 2000).]

[EviLToYLeT]

You can try overlaying your pic over the original to see whats wrong. Frankly, the lips dont match the rest of the tilt.. just try putting your drawing over the original

[Transcendence]

the main thing that jumps out at me is the spacing between the nose and eyes. ther are other thigns, but I need to take a quick shower..so I'll edit this in a while

[hennifer]

you'd probably have an easier time, and learn a lot more if you picked someone with a bit more character in their face. all these model girls are nice to look at, sure, but they've got generic features that don't translate well into portraits. try drawing a hideously ugly person. seriously.

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hennifer

[Bubonic]

Thanks for the suggestions, and good point hennifer, ill try that