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Skorpian · Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 4:01 pm

hmmm, a number 42...coincidence? I think NOT!

Aside from the uncomfortable looking large and mashed breast section and the odd perspective on the face, it looks great. For the chest, just try to tone it down a bit, I know it's Anime, but that doesn't mean she HAS to have abnormally large breasts. The face...hmmm...I agree with Loukus, try to use a cross on the basic shape of the face to get proportion and alignment worked out correctly.

Keep it up!

- Skorp

DeadlySCSI · Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 12:26 am

Here's Falcon (Cybernetic Experiment turned Corporation Peace-Keeper), hope she goes down well...

REALLY IMPORTANT NOTICE! - If you think that a few bits look familiar then you're probably right. I've mixed and matched a little with the componants. e.g. Taking the idea of the Quake Marines Helmet, the idea of the Halo Marines Shoulder Bits, Oni's Plate-armour idea... even a pose copied from an Oni anime picture... I can't do poses right now. So I'm not really sure if this count's as 100% original picture or not.Comments are really welcome (even ones which take the p*ss)

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Loukus · Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 12:32 am

hmmm excellent X, quite a bit better than any of my X's, most of mine are REALLY rudimentry.

THere is it! not too shabby the face looks a bit twisted though. Try using a cross across the face to fix the alignments, unless you already did, then uh... yeah... like I said I looks kindof like the Rocketeer...

What's on her CHEST? it looks like a spare parachute. Either that or that armor is really uncomfortable...

Joel Loukus

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DeadlySCSI · Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2000 3:00 am

Wondered who would notice 42.

hmmm. I can see what you mean... (looking back at it after a day or so)... That's what you get for a)drawing the head last and trying to make it fit on the page... b)watching Channel 5...

c)having parachutes on the brain

Saying that you'd be suprised at how many of my friends thought she was a "he"...

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2000 8:37 am

*nod* agree with everything up there. might want to consider adding a chin /neck line because right now her head looks like a little stub. Also, since it's a side view, the jaw side near the eye covered up should be alittle squarish.