[Mime]

I eventually bought a scanner so here is some pics from my sketchbooks

here are 2 nude sketches i did in class (i did a lot more but i have not scanned everything )

5 minuts pose


and 2 mins pose, only with straight lines (was the rule for this one)



here are some very quick sketches (5 to 10 seconds i think) from moving people i did at the station







really like this one


[This message has been edited by Mime (edited November 23, 2000).]

[Mime]

here is more

these one are quick sketches (20 seconds to 1 minut) of static people at the same station.

[Mime]

and finally, some things i draw in front of my TV (VCR in pause) from the great show "The Practice"

the 3 first ones are like 3 or 4 minutes (duration of the pause) , and the last one is about 30 minuts









tell me your opinions, and tell me where i should focus to improve.
I think i need to learn to find the right line/pencil strike faster and at first try since for now i think im doodling a lot before i find the good strokes.
And dont hesitate to be harsh (not mean ), im not here to play doll, i want to improve

[This message has been edited by Mime (edited November 23, 2000).]

[Shaded]

Loosen up your hand/wrist when you sketch.

[Mime]

WHat do you mean exactly by "loose" ? im French and this is one word i have some problems translating every time i see it
Juste give me some concrete example so i can understand exactly what you mean

thanxs

[Mime]

Anyone else has anything to say, any constructive criticism to give me ?

[halo thirteen]

it means relax your wrist, let it flow a bit more.

[Brue]

i love your drawings, they are fast and simple but nice. I think you have the right idea.



[This message has been edited by Brue (edited November 24, 2000).]

[Mime]

Helo thirteen : ok thanxs now i understand more clearly the word

thanxs brue