| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Topic : "new pic for friends short story" |
eclipse
member
Member #
Joined: 11 Nov 1999
Posts: 140
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
|
 Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2000 3:06 pm |
 |
 |
| Any chance we can read the story somewhere? Or is it just on paper? |
|
| Back to top |
|
kaylon
member
Member #
Joined: 08 Nov 2000
Posts: 128
Location: Dundee, Scotland
|
| Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 12:11 am |
|
|
Okay lets see if i can post it here heheh.
what ya think?.
[This message has been edited by kaylon (edited November 22, 2000).] |
|
| Back to top |
|
opticillusion
member
Member #
Joined: 22 Sep 2000
Posts: 255
|
| Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 12:12 am |
|
|
I like the negative effect you're using. The figure looks great, especially the arms and and face, but one suggestion would be to eliminate the legs and just have him fade out into smoke or something instead of having the legs fade back in. Just a thought.
[This message has been edited by opticillusion (edited November 22, 2000).] |
|
| Back to top |
|
kaylon
member
Member #
Joined: 08 Nov 2000
Posts: 128
Location: Dundee, Scotland
|
| Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 12:15 am |
|
|
hahah gotn it, thanks  |
|
| Back to top |
|
Gecko
member
Member #
Joined: 07 Mar 2000
Posts: 876
Location: Finland
|
|
| Back to top |
|
kaylon
member
Member #
Joined: 08 Nov 2000
Posts: 128
Location: Dundee, Scotland
|
| Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 10:30 am |
|
|
| The story is just on paper atm, and not finished....dunno if it ever will be finished heheheh. But if it ever is I'll post it on my site . |
|
| Back to top |
|
Dives
member
Member #
Joined: 22 Sep 2000
Posts: 392
Location: Finland
|
| Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 10:33 am |
|
|
deffinetly get rid of the legs. All genies must float free!! FREE THE GENIES!!
------------------
"believe nothing that you hear and only half of what you see" Chris de burgh
"Don't go to heaven, It is really only hell" Ronnie James Dio |
|
| Back to top |
|
ceenda
member
Member #
Joined: 27 Jun 2000
Posts: 2030
|
| Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 10:54 am |
|
|
kaylon: I like your pic alot. The style kinda reminds me of the guy who took over from Simon Bisley to do the artwork for Slaine in 2000AD.
BTW - Visited your site, very cool indeed. Also, nice to have more Scots around.
Do you know of a games company in Aberdeen called Second Skin Media?
------------------
--
Nicholas Anderson
email: [email protected]
web: Flying Islands
-- affiliates --
..::sketchboard.co.uk |
|
| Back to top |
|
EviLToYLeT
member
Member #
Joined: 09 Aug 2000
Posts: 1216
Location: CA, USA
|
| Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 11:31 am |
|
|
| *nod* get rid of the legs and negative effect. It looks filter ridden and doesnt match with the rest of the picture. I'd suggest drawing a lamp at the bottom and then having mist coming out towards the genie |
|
| Back to top |
|
kaylon
member
Member #
Joined: 08 Nov 2000
Posts: 128
Location: Dundee, Scotland
|
| Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2000 11:44 am |
|
|
Hay Ceenda...your just down the road from me hehehe...and no aint heard of them ummmm...
I currently work for a US based games dev studio doing textures and skin's and Concept illustrations...but I might look em up.
Do they have a web site that you know of ?.
Also I'm re working Genie after all the comments...I love the lamp Idea, wish I'd thought of that in the first place.. . |
|
| Back to top |
|
Isric
member
Member #
Joined: 23 Jul 2000
Posts: 1200
Location: Calgary AB
|
| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 12:28 am |
|
|
| I think in this case the Filter usage is quite nice. (nobody stone me yet, I have seen classy filter usage and admit it, this is a good example of it). Just get the legs out and you've got one hell of a picture. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
