[dd]

and now



ok do you think please crtz
first time using wacom tablet
should i continue
with it
dd

[afex]

It looks like a good start with a tablet, the face looks a little diformed, and i see some bumppy nipple in there , but its a good start.

[dd]

please please please critz new guy
you all inspired me to do this anyway so it is your fault

[dd]

tanxs m8 still working on face etc
and is the bumpy nipple no good then
by the way twice as hard cause i am colour blind

[dd]

i need more critz please
ahhh come on i am new here

[dd]

try again

[bTk]

I have to say I like it but it lacks proper shading and it looks a little out of proportion.
Nice little dabble with the WACOM has turned out nice though.

[Matt Elder]

OK for a first attempt that is pretty cool and I'd keep up at it. For the sketch itself, the face seemed a little too round and when you coloured it, this really stands out. There is something about the face that suggests this female is quite old and I think it is the fact the face appears to be 'dirty', just through the dull grey colour that seems to come through, not only on the face, but on the entire skin.

In general, try to have your highlights lighter and your shadows a bit darker (ie expand the range of you colours). Once you do this, your image won't look as flat and have more life to it. If you don't know how to do it, just so you understand the idea of colour range, play around with the dodge and burn tools in photoshop.

The 'fish net' stockings or whatever they are are not coming through as clearly on the coloured version. hmmm.... wouldn't it be a little impractical to be fighting in these as if it gets caught on a twig or something...

The hand holding the sword appears to be a bit flat and doesn't have a good feel of depth to it. It think this has more to do with the actual sketch rather than the colouring itself.

I'm also not sold on the general structure of the breast. You could almost draw a straight line downwards and the line of the breast wouldn't deviate too much from it. I think it needs to be a little more 'shapely and curvy' than what it is. The nipple also jumped out at me and was the first thing I noticed. It just doesn't look right for some reason.

Hopefully that crit was of some use. I don't mean to totally rip the image apart as I think you have some real potential and just trying to point out a few things.

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See ya on da flip side
Matt
http://www.mattelder.com

[dd]

well matt thanks for the comments
and yeah the colours are flat
i am colour blind so i am trying hard to get her to look human in colour and not alien and also it is not nearly finished yet
i wanted to get the forums crit before i continue hence the fish net face and hand
details
but thanks for the ideas though
dd

[Dryfire]

AHHHAhahahaa, your an evil fetish boy AHHH...
I like it although her facer is a bit screwed up!, its mainly because theres hardly any color difference, plus her eyes kinda blend it. try coloring with the lines first then remove the them

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'Reality is just a dream'
GoD Graphics

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tanxs dryfire
i will add more colour but as i said i am colour blind would hate to ruin her
but i will add a new one soon
so keep looking
and fetish yeah