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Kjetil Nystuen · Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 2:41 pm

I'm trying to get done with this guy. I want him to look a bit cartoonish. Please help me out with some critics. I think his glasses may look a little strange.

Also I've noticed that the color on his suit varies from "bluish purple" on my Mac to VERY blue on some PC's...

-Kjetil

Plouffe · member Member # Joined: 17 Nov 2000 Posts: 225

i think it look great the way it is... maybe work on the cape kinda looks underworked.

waylon · Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 2:59 pm

That is a very, very cool looking super hero!

Can't think of any crits, really, except there's a little bit of stray yellow coming off of each of his boots.

toast! · Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 6:51 pm

he looks great and very original

i think that the cape should float a little more on his left side ; this cape has also a painted look (or maybe it looks too rought), that looks quite weird compared to the clean cartoons lines of the rest of the pic

btw, i love that "captain gold teeth", very sympathic and funny

Periadam · Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 9:41 pm

very cool. I like his expression (and the gold tooth). But the cape does need a bit more work.

-Peri

Gecko · Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 10:12 am

Aaaahaha! Looks really cool!
I have nothing to say about the character, the pic does scream for a background though. I love the coloring of his upper body. Perspective's great as well.

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dd · member Member # Joined: 09 Nov 2000 Posts: 69 Location: uk

you need no advice this is great man
love it to bits did you do it with a wacom
as i am just starting to use mine so can you please give me advice instead
dd

Solitaire · Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 10:38 am

would have been a nice addition to last month's draw club

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I also noticed, that my pics' colours suck on Mac - I guess it's due to different gamma-setting on both systems

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Jerry · Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 11:30 am

very nice... I know what those yellow thing coming out of the boots.. I think he was trying to make like fins or sometin... maybe a background can finish it...

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tzekin · Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 1:11 pm

Hi, the picture is good as it is. I see bluish purple and I'm with mac. PC and color is like Deep space and gravity :-)
Great work

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Kjetil Nystuen · Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 2:46 pm

Hey.....
Nice critics, thanks!!
I haven't been drawing today, so I looked at the pic with fresh eyes. There got to be a better way to solve the cape... Does anyone has any ideas?

Also, I agree that he needs some kind of background, but what? I'm very happy for every help I can get, because I'm a little blank...

-Kjetil

marc_taro · Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 3:32 pm

good character -but lighting is inconsistant on torso and legs, there is no shadow on the forward boot, cape obviously, I would consider the perspective of the belt, it probably needs to be tilted in space so you are above the disk...good start tho.

also, Consider putting the brightest white highights on the pointing hand, to pop it up.

keep itup!

[Optima] · member Member # Joined: 08 May 2000 Posts: 58

Very cool.. I dig the gold tooth.. Nice work L)

Jenn · Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 12:50 am

Meow... I sure hope he doesnt poop his suit.

Looks funny.. Such chicken legs

Dont get me wrong.. I lubb it

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Jenn · Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 12:51 am

Meow... I sure hope he doesnt poop his suit.

Looks funny.. Such chicken legs

Dont get me wrong.. I lubb it

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DarkChyld

Jenn · Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 12:55 am

Meow... I sure hope he doesnt poop his suit.

Looks funny.. Such chicken legs

Dont get me wrong.. I lubb it

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DarkChyld

Awetopsy · Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 11:06 am

Thats awesome!

great muscle work. Cape needs some touching up but still cool. background would be nice too.

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