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burn0ut
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can someone give me some suggestions? the arms r kinda forked right now but anyone notice anything else i could work on? |
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Seven of Swords
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| Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 7:02 pm |
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Is this supposed to be depicting a boxer, or is the nose wipe just a coincidental pose.
Well for one his insteps of his feet are insanely large, this guy would have a lot of trouble fitting into any shoes.
Also there is something odd about the anatomical scale of his back, how the navel lines up with the small of the back, but that might be just a side effect of the perspective.
Also, the arms aren't that out of shape, though you may want to mellow the edge/angle on his tricep, but that just again might be an error on my understanding of perspective or a scanner burp?
I like the sketch though...
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 8:03 pm |
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heh
well if nobody has noticed how big i always draw my feet heh 
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 9:57 am |
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| anyone one else pleeaseee |
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Tiger Eaten
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| Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 10:01 am |
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I like it. Reminds me a bit of the character out of "Fist of the North Star", the bare chest and hair maybe? I think the pic would have a lot more pull if you added a bit more detail to the face, clear up exactly what is going on with his eyes. A little hard to understand right now. Keep up the sketching!
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Solitaire
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| Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 10:25 am |
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Well, the big feet don't matter as it looks like B-Boy style 
nice one - go clean the lines and color it
[This message has been edited by Solitaire (edited November 19, 2000).] |
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 4:31 am |
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I really like the style of the image but I think you proportions are a little all over the place. The character has big feet although the side profile of the right foot seems to actually be too short. The head might be a little too small considering the size of everything else. The characters right wrist also looks to be rolled over too much considering the pose.
I think you have a really nice clean style but it is let down by proportions at the moment. Try to have a look at some male bodies and see how they work and move. This should help you with proportions as if you can understand the muscles, the rest should fall into place.
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