[ZiG]

Hey all,

This was a quick sketch I was playing with tonight. Can you guys point out the anatomy problems, I'd like to go back and refine it. Also any better clothing ideas, im not coming up with anything tonight as you can see heh. thanks.


-ryan

[dd]

hi there i am new but i can answer a few points here on this pic
the body looks great but the face her lips are too big and her eyes too and maybe her nose aswell
as for the clothes her bottom part is good and suits but i think that her top half should be covered by a single wrap style cloth instead of the bra thing
hope this helps
dd

[Ampa]

The construction of the bra / bikini top is rather odd. The point / angle at which the straps join the cups is unrealistic, and would not give support.

There does seem to be a bit of a contrast of styles here too - the face is a little cartoony, with the features all super puffy. Yet the body is drawn as a natural body shape.

Ampa.

[Jason Manley]

she has no hands

: )

nice start though.

jason

[TheMilkMan]

Hmmm I don't agree with the other people I think that the face looks ok, the only real problem is that her shoulders look wrong. Hmm wish I had time to rework it...errrr anyways her shoulders are to close to her neck they are out of perportion to her body a female of her wieght would have wide slender shoulders that give her figure a curved..look at some comic book reference ..good luck