[KD]

Erm constructive critisism would be nice :P


these forums are nothing compared to OCSS...

[This message has been edited by KD (edited November 17, 2000).]

[DeadlySCSI]

You are looking in the wrong place for "Constructive Critism" in this place, the vile stench of Elitism hangs in the air like a corrosive mist. Your picture is likly to be bashed and torn apart from the Over-zealous "Critics"... You might get some genuinly constructive points after the first 3 or 4 replies... Good luck.

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Wow, for a first attempt that is good! Perhaps the features could be a little smoother but other than that... nice one!

You might escape the nasty critics' wrath with it...

Keep neuturing your skill... people will think highly of you for it (escpecially if your young). And if they don't, they are a bit sad...

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[]|V|[ERLIN]

nice kd hows it goin? ehhh are u ever gonna release that sgg552 sniper rifle for cs that u did? (ls3 modeled it?)

or are u a different KD aka King Dung

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[Jezebel]

Heya KD,

A couple of things that I see are 1) the cheekbones. I'm not sure if you're going for really sunken in cheeks or if you are trying to make this guy look sort of alien with a flap of skin hanging off of his cheeks. It comes to such a sharp point at the bottom that it looks as though it's detached from his face. Can you see what I'm talking about there?

Also his tatoo, it looks kinda of weird having the same shapes facing the exact same way on both sides. Maybe flip one so it's facing the other way?

Not bad for your first try! He seems like an interesting character. Maybe try cleaning up your lines a little more as well.

And ummm... DeadlySCSI.. err... "Keep neuturing your skill"? Do you mean nurturing? Cause umm... if you mean neutering, what exactly are you trying to say here?

-Beth

[sacrelicious]

DeadlySCSI, you seem a tad bitter...

And KD, very nicely done for your first stab at it. If you prefer the OCSS forums, however, then by all means stay there. If you decide to stick around though, we'd all like to see more of your work. Until then... sayonara.

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[Jaymo]

OK, I'll just point out the major mistakes I see in the pic, I hope that is constructive to you. It's not my intention to rip it off. I will refer to standard human anatomy, so if you altered it intentionally, just ignore my comment.
The nose is veeeery long, while the part from nose to chin is too compressed. As Jezebel pointed out the cheeks and wrinkles surrounding the nose are way too sharp. His ear appears very small. The lines on his throat should be leading towards his torso center, right now they end on the necks side. His breast and ribcage are outlined to much while his arms are not defined, the centerline on his belly looks odd, too. His nipples should be located farther from the torsos center.
Hope you don't feel bad about my words, I hope this does help you to improve the picture. I like the impression on his face and the colors you chose. And I don't think you should flip half the tattoo, every superhuman hero features symmetrical facial tattoos these days...

[KD]

Erm I didnt mean they were BETTER forums I meant that you should see the bashing newbies get on OCSS...

wasnt really going for realism just what looked kewl so I know the nose is out of proportion etc

and yes this is KD, MErlin hows it going mate and that sig 552 was finshed ages ago but..I dnno never got round to it.