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N8X
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This is an image im working on, stil have alot to do, but the image is from one of my favorite books "Evolutions Darling" IT's all about A.I. Grrrr
Something is brothing me about this pic. Maybe her face? Is her torso to long? I know her right hand is alittle small.
I plan to add more refected light thats coming off the girl on the A.I. Guy. There is some on there now but i think i need more. I still plan to add a background and mirco filiments comming from the AI connecting to the women.
any help is welcome..
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Shaded
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| Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2000 3:15 pm |
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The face needs working on. The features are...hrm...off centered, perhaps in the wrong perspective...the lips need depth, dimesion, something...
Cant really express this verbally...arg, i hope you get what Im talking about...
[ps, the nose needs work as well - i think its too low on the face]
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Seven of Swords
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| Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2000 3:31 pm |
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It's her torso i believe. Her ribcage is wider than her shoulders. It's a subtle thing, but it stands out glaringly to me.
Also, her hairline/bangs are far too simplistic.
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