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MisterOwl
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Here's the new page. Let me know what you think!
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sear
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| Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 2:18 am |
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good job 
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Flexible Elf
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 5:40 pm |
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| Dude, that is AWESOME. |
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 11:05 pm |
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So, where's the rest?
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So...which part of "get out of town freak" weren't you clear on, John?
Joe Dillingham
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TheMilkMan
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| Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 11:14 pm |
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It has all the elements of good story telling in the comic book sense...Depending on your target audince this comics artwork is perfect for the story ( I think ) looks good bratha keep it up!
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MisterOwl
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| Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2000 1:59 am |
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Thank you for all of your positive words!
A.Buttle: Pages 1 & 2 are on this forum somewhere. I posted pg. 1 about three weeks ago, and pg. 2 somewhere in between. If you want to see them, you might have to hunt a little.
Milk Man: I appreciate your brief analysis of my work. Its important for me to know if wether or not my story-telling is effective. This story-line is chartoony, and perhaps a little more appealing for a younger audience, however my goal is to make it a "family comic" if you get my meaning.
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Blitz
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| Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2000 2:29 am |
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Ok how do I subscribe.
Thats cool Owl.
Layout is nice, Good line quality, yes..quite excilent.
Blitz....2nd Gunman on the ranch
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