[Solitaire]

Hi boyz'n'gallz, made a few sketches for a storyboard and drew this one by accident (the story is about Inliners)...
I liked it and thought this one would be nice to color in PS...

but sth's wrong with the board, what do you think?

[Solitaire]

my posts seem to be invisible...

[Liquid!]

This ones hard. I think you need to shorten her legs, re-work the upshot on her face [her left side of the face is missing], draw the hands more solidly. I think some of the other proportions will fall into place a bit more once the legs are fixed. Also I had no idea she was holding a snow board until you said something. Maybe you'd want to feature it a bit more prominently in the pic.

Hope that helps.

-c

[Jaymo]

Hm. I guess you did it intentionally, but to me it appears really odd, that her skin is so dark and exactly the same color as her trousers and skirt. Makes it visually hard to understand IMO. The linework looks pretty good to me, I think it should be colored a quite different way...

[Solitaire]

Thanks for the crits, I'll try to correct the errors.

Jaymo - that's not the coloring - I always make shading and lighting in B/W before applying the coloring. I only played with the clothes ...
later the trousers will be in a complete different tone than the skin