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SuperFish
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 12:24 am     Reply with quote
This is a quick figure study I did in PS. No photo reference ws used. Please give any feed back you might have (peportion, color, positive/negative comments, and any thing else).

Many thanks.

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bloodsugar
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 12:39 am     Reply with quote
i like the tonal studies... but the body looks more male than female..
try make the waist on the right side slimer, the crotch area... ermm.. less bulgey

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Mime
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 8:55 am     Reply with quote
I really like it, the colors and the sketchy look is really great.
And for the anatomy , i just see her as an athletic woman, but i think she is still very sexy
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Transcendent
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 9:00 am     Reply with quote
Excellent work, buddy, but some of the proportions are wrong, her shoulders and her waist. It makes her look rather male ...
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Budoka
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 9:11 am     Reply with quote
Great picture, I like the effect with the {paintbrush and noise}. I think she just looks like the oldstyle masters' statues.
Pretty lush.
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Solitaire
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 10:30 am     Reply with quote
I have to agree with the other's about the masculine look, but I like the technique .
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marc_taro
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 1:33 pm     Reply with quote
Try to keep the center line that passes through the torso smooth and organic. See seems a litle stiff as the waist and hips translate to the pelvis. I think her shoulders are a bit wide. Also women have 'flatter' colar bones than men, they don't curve donwn as much. Head may be a tad small. Nice brushwork as most have said. HOWEVER, there is not really any good reason to be drawing without reference if you are actually trying to learn fast. The guy with the best reference wins. I know people are proud of doing without - it is a skill, but you have to have a solid understanding of the figure first before you start making it up. Use reference - I think there might be a few pictures of girls to choose from on the net....
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Mergatroid
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 1:58 pm     Reply with quote
This is the closest thing that I've seen to a matisse on the puter so far. It looks like an etching or someting along those lines.




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Periadam
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 5:35 pm     Reply with quote
That woman looks REALLY buff to me. You sure you wanted her that *ehem* well-muscled?
Torso might be a bit long, but overall its a nice pic
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SuperFish
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 9:43 am     Reply with quote
Thanks a lot for the comments. It's really helpful.
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