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SuperFish junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 39 Location: Canada
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 12:24 am |
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This is a quick figure study I did in PS. No photo reference ws used. Please give any feed back you might have (peportion, color, positive/negative comments, and any thing else).
Many thanks.
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bloodsugar junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Oct 2000 Posts: 25 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 12:39 am |
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i like the tonal studies... but the body looks more male than female..
try make the waist on the right side slimer, the crotch area... ermm.. less bulgey
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Mime member
Member # Joined: 02 Oct 2000 Posts: 224 Location: France
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 8:55 am |
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I really like it, the colors and the sketchy look is really great.
And for the anatomy , i just see her as an athletic woman, but i think she is still very sexy ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Transcendent member
Member # Joined: 07 Sep 2000 Posts: 53 Location: Somewhere, Somtime, Somehow
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 9:00 am |
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Excellent work, buddy, but some of the proportions are wrong, her shoulders and her waist. It makes her look rather male ... |
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Budoka member
Member # Joined: 29 Oct 2000 Posts: 157 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 9:11 am |
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Great picture, I like the effect with the {paintbrush and noise}. I think she just looks like the oldstyle masters' statues.
Pretty lush. |
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Solitaire member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 2000 Posts: 429 Location: Hamburg (Germany)
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 10:30 am |
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I have to agree with the other's about the masculine look, but I like the technique . |
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marc_taro member
Member # Joined: 27 Sep 2000 Posts: 128 Location: Boston
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 1:33 pm |
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Try to keep the center line that passes through the torso smooth and organic. See seems a litle stiff as the waist and hips translate to the pelvis. I think her shoulders are a bit wide. Also women have 'flatter' colar bones than men, they don't curve donwn as much. Head may be a tad small. Nice brushwork as most have said. HOWEVER, there is not really any good reason to be drawing without reference if you are actually trying to learn fast. The guy with the best reference wins. I know people are proud of doing without - it is a skill, but you have to have a solid understanding of the figure first before you start making it up. Use reference - I think there might be a few pictures of girls to choose from on the net.... ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/wink.gif) |
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Mergatroid member
Member # Joined: 30 May 2000 Posts: 165 Location: Pasadena, ca U.S.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 1:58 pm |
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This is the closest thing that I've seen to a matisse on the puter so far. It looks like an etching or someting along those lines.
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Periadam member
Member # Joined: 10 Nov 2000 Posts: 254 Location: Sackville, NB. Canada.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 5:35 pm |
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That woman looks REALLY buff to me. You sure you wanted her that *ehem* well-muscled?
Torso might be a bit long, but overall its a nice pic ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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SuperFish junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 39 Location: Canada
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 9:43 am |
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Thanks a lot for the comments. It's really helpful. |
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