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Joined: 09 Mar 2000
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Location: marlboro, NJ

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 7:24 pm     Reply with quote
Hey guys here's a piece I started this morning just got back from a week in florida. A little rusty, but I would like to know what you think.

And I'm looking for help on lighting and background. Something dynamic, thanks.

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right eye close-up:


Thanks guys
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Joined: 05 Apr 2000
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Location: karlskrona, sweden

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 9:24 am     Reply with quote
hello.

his nose looks a little wierd.
it looks like the tip is a ball or something.
i think the flat part of the upperlip should be a little bit smaller.
and his neck should go the other way, from behind his ears to the body .


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 9:47 am     Reply with quote
I like the attitude of it
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Joined: 03 Nov 2000
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 10:17 am     Reply with quote
I don't like the shoulder part; as if he is lacking of a male back. The nose is very extreme in it's length (maybe intended?, even his highness prince Charles of Wales doesn't reach that length . If that's a uniform (could be an old french one), he looks too harmless to me, to be part of higher army ranks.
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