[Hawkswift]

So far so good... Everyone that walked in while I was working on it knew it was me...

needs a lot of work though.

[Lukias]

Good start, I think you'll find most people will tell you to do more before asking for crit.

Sweet so far.

[pierre]

Hi hawkswift,

I agree with Lukias that it seems to be a good start. Nice to see that you didn't let yourself be bogged up with details at this early stage. I think it can and will be a very fine portrait if you continue on concentrating on the major forms and colors at the early stages, and apparantly you have done so.

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[McSteed]

Are you actually blurry like that?



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