[Wiked Ewok]

had a sketch version which I scanned then colored. I'm not too happy with the stomach, it seems...flat. I think her breasts are nice though. Need some crits on the coloring, maybe some on the figure itself.

full size colored is here: http://www.geocities.com/gbaudio/art/angelfull.jpg (warning, its 250kb)

sketched full size w/o color here: http://www.geocities.com/gbaudio/art/angelline.jpg

Crit Crit Crit

thanks

[Zaph0d]

to tell you the truth, this might be one of the coolest pics ive ver seen, i think the lower part of her body (thights, stomach) aernt sharp enough, try to get the same effect as you did on her upper torso on the lower half. i Find the yellow on the inside curve of her wings a little confusing, they should have more of the orange from the glow of the sword.
really cool man

[Delucubus]

First, i really like this pic. I like the size of the wings, it really gives it that amlost "holy" feeling. I agree with zaphod, the reflection on the wings should reflect the light from the sword. One thing i also noticed was her left arm is kinda funky. I can't tell if it's too small or too short, or what, just looks weird compared to the right one.

I can't wait to see this finished.

[Wiked Ewok]

Alright here's a 10 minute fix of the angel.


Zap:
Yea her lower torso was Tooo sharp in the original so I tried to blur it up a bit but I guess it was too much. In the high res, you can see it is extremely sharp. And you're also right about the wings. Those were the first things I did and I was actually just thinking of having a white light flame, not an orange one..thus the yellow reflection. I changed that in the edited.

Del:
I was looking at the arms, and I noticed that both of them were funky. The one to the right had a wierd wrist, sort of small, so I fattened it up. And the one on the left, the way it joined the shoulders was awkward. Hopefully the edited did a better job at recreating the arms

Thanks for the crits guys

[Wiked Ewok]

On a side note, who thinks I overdid the breasts??..cuz I Sure don't think so. My friend is saying that they are too popped out, that the light hits too hard on them. Hrmm that might be why he thinks they're so big..