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Dakkan
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 Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 9:42 am |
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i originaly started off the a scetch of her in photoshop, but then started working on the background. after about 2 weeks, i decided to start finishing the pic, and finished painting her and the sword. I still consider it unfinished, cuz there's a lot i could have still done, but i need to start making new compositions, so i left it. tell me what u think.
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]|V|[ERLIN
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 9:50 am |
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DAMN NICE!
backround is awesome!
(i ma a newbie so i dont know if i am right i think so but some may disagree:
the sword is to well bold rotate it alittle so it looks more 3d so we see it a@ a slighjt angel that way it will blend in a little more (that is just my 2 cents.)
very nice man!
bckround is amaziong! |
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Robert
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 10:39 am |
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| The painting looks really cool, cant wait to see the final version! |
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TheMilkMan
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 11:01 am |
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| All in all I would say it looks good. I would also like to say that the arms need more definition and some of the other parts on her body and not very defined...the background especially the mountains is a bit flat but you might be able to work that out by giving it a little atmospheric fogging they are much to crisp to be mountains in the dsitance.... |
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JohnGone
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 11:41 am |
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I like your lighting.
Can she lift that big sword?
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 4:44 pm |
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Nice man, very nice. I liek the lighting. Try adding her shadow though, she looks kinda flat, a drop shadow might help too. try and make the color of her skin a little bluer, it will help it mend with the background
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TurboYVR
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 8:01 pm |
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she also seems to "float" a li'l bit... the sword and her could use a little more interaction with the background...
she does't really seem to stand on the ground... |
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anticz
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 8:22 pm |
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Just a few comments on your proportion. See image below.
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