[tyron]

Hi!
Those two pictures were finished this weekend, they've been lying around for a while so i thought i should do something about them..
i could do alot more on the cyborg but i don't feel like it, i think it's a boring picture =)
anyways, here they are.


I would really appreciate some feedback!
Thanks...

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Truth is in the eye of the beholder.

[Matt Elder]

Some interesting images and showing real signs of potential. The lady's mouth (her left) extends too far and looks funny. You might like to go over it. Around the picture you have thin black lines to define the image. Try to move away from this. To do this for example, on her chin, have really dark colours below it and light ones above it. This will provide the definition that you need and improve the look and feel of the image.

The cyborg one looks interesting and I like the way you have created some textures. Again same comments about the line as above. What you need to do is provide contrasting colours that will define the lines, and not actually use lines.

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See ya on da flip side
Matt
http://www.mattelder.com

[tyron]

Hey matt... thanks for the comments..
I agree with you on the mouth.
But you say "Around the picture you have thin black lines" and thats not true, the only black lines on that picture is on the eyes and the eyebrows.

I gotta choose if i'm going for the comic style or for realistic images...

Thanks anyhow.


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Truth is in the eye of the beholder.

[Jerry]

The shading on the second one's cool man...

-KARN

[tyron]

Thanks! haven't worked on it very much though.