[mcr]

Well, I have this great idea for a painting. This is the problem area, i can see it already. This is just a small portion of the pic, its all a rough sketch right now, but i want the girl to be correct from the very beginning, so i dont have bigger problems down the road. If anyone could paint over this, point me in the right direction, get the pose and proportions right ,(somethings wrong with my version, dont know what)i would be very thankful. Have a nice night!

[This message has been edited by mcr (edited November 04, 2000).]

[Matt Elder]

I couldn't see the picture. When I went to the source code for the page and got the url, I got a message saying I didn't have permission to view that file. Sometimes different servers won't let you link to files, only the main page.

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Matt
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[mcr]

Ok,my server was down (actually my friends) so i put it up on some free webspace sever and it sucked. But all is well once again with my friends sever. Here it is
Thanks!

[Impus]

DISCLAIMER: I'm not much of a real life artist but these things stood out.

Now the disclaimer is over on with the CRIT, I touched a few things here and there, mainly shortened the stomach and neck length and added more defining shading.

Advice:
*You got a problem with the far butt cheek being bigger than the close one which in theory, since further away from the view plain, should be smaller.

*The overall pose is great but the hands don't seem to be doing anything, it's not a very relaxed pose. Maybe have her hold something out it front of her? You know open palms with a glowing ball or something like that in them.

*TITS bigger (Never too big 8)! I lie, they can be left as is with it looking unrealistic but are they visualally appealing? You be the judge.)


Here is some tweeking I have done.....




GOOD LUCK!

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[mcr]

thank you very much, it really helps.