[Jerry]

I've just learned a new skill and created this. These art are all posted on my website www.webcom3000.net still improving though

[This message has been edited by Jerry (edited November 03, 2000).]

[nightmare]

i had to go to ur webpage and look for the pic since it doesn't work here. I think its great! for some reason i feel her mouth is a tiny bit crooked tho, and the shadows on one cheek are different from the other. im assuming the light source is coming from in front of her, so u'll need to fix the highlights to show that. also, right now her hair isn't reflecting the light at all, either that or the extreme crappiness of my monitor isn't showing it the bit of jaw on the right (our right) is kinda funky, but again it might b my resolution.

good job! i think its very moody and great for a first try! why hasn't anyone else replied yet?!

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[EviLToYLeT]

Her face is a bit lopsided. Everything is off center. I think that if your intending on making her lie down, the hair should fall over the face. Try not to use the smudge, dodge, burn tools much because right now her face looks really chunky. But, I really like the lips Lips are always the hardest part for me to do.

[Matt Elder]

The image is interesting (although a bit big). You have the same problem that took me a while to figure out how to overcome - the whole image being a little blurry. I would imagine you are using a soft edge brush. Try using a hard edge one as it makes things sharp. If it is leaving hard edges that you don't like, then go over it with a soft edge brush.

hope that is of help (I just wish someone told me rather than butchering a few images to figure that out).

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[Jerry]

Thanx For The Replies. Now I've Got New Ideas On My Other Picture