[Aimok]

Hi there, this is one of my newest designed
characters for my (manga)comic.
Some tips?Is it Ok? What do yer think?

[micke]

Angels with guns?!
I like Fairies with shotguns better, hehe.
Honest, the picture don't load, so i can't see anything..

[This message has been edited by micke (edited November 03, 2000).]

[Francis]

It's cool - the skin tone you chose seems a little grey to me, but that might be something you intended.

Crits:
More line weight differentiation! More refined detail on the gun (can't understand how it's put together exactly...)!

Great pic tho!



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Francis Tsai
TeamGT Studios

[micke]

Now i can see it
Overall i like the shapes alot.
I think the lines drag down the quality of the picture. Especially the lines on the gun
(it makes the gun look soft).
Maybe you can try with thinner lines?
I don't like the chosen colours for the character, but that's just my personal taste.
You could try to do the skin colour brighter.
It's too greyish right now.

The drawing looks fantastic.

-Micke

[micke]

By the way. Do you base your drawings on
existing ones? Just curious.

-Mikael

[Jezebel]

Very "oni" :>

[Aimok]

First Thx for the comments.

The colours should be so grey,not so extrem hippy-LSD-colours, but I will perhaps change this.

Yeah,to the outline, my problem is, I make a new layer and copy the original artwork into the new one and make it on "multiply".
(like in the tutorial of Dabih

But then the outline are so thick...

I dont know ,how to avoid this.

[Aimok]

I forgot-

the figure is my own creation,I havent orientated on other pics!
(ok ,perhaps a little bit of Ghost in the shell, but only at the colours)