[Cos]

ello

I think your sketch looks quite good so far. I like the head and its shading.
One thing that is ruining it, is the pipes and the metal spine are not shaded
the same way. The outlines are too strong and thick and they are making it look
flat. Try and shade them more as a whole like the head, and keep the outlines thin
where the most light is.

Also that thing on his head, if it is a metal plate, then it shouldnt be shaded exactly
like the head because it is a different material and would reflect the light differently
than skin would.

hope this helps.

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-Cos Koniotis-

http://www.3dpalette.org/~coskoniotis

[AcidDrone]

cos! have seen you around these boards in awhile, you been hiding?

[tyron]

Hey guys..
I made this one while i was travelling with the bus, it had some strange patterns on the window. I have no idea what it was...

Any way, i need critics on how to make it look better, i also want to know if you think it's worth finishing?
Thanks in advance..

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Truth is in the eye of the beholder.

[Cos]

aciddrone how u doin m8 yeah i havent been about that much recently,
suprised anyone noticed tho hehe. I did post a few bits n bobs this last
cuple o' weeks tho, somewhere way back in the old topics proby. Is true,
I should make more of an effort, I a lazy bugger :P

*goes back to me secret underground bunker*

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-Cos Koniotis-

http://www.3dpalette.org/~coskoniotis

[tyron]

Uhm.. yeah, right..

Thanks alot anyway cos, i agree with you on all your points, i shall consider them and do something about them...

See you.

[This message has been edited by tyron (edited November 02, 2000).]