[inferno]

hi there

i was a PS freak, and it's my first try with painter. painter rox! i'd really appreciate some comments (about anatomical problems)

regards,
inf

[inferno]

[Guy]

wow.. thats really nice stuff
the colours are nice and the shading is pretty good too

[inferno]

well, thanks..
actualy i will correct some problems on paper first, draw some more caracters and
somekind of background. then i can make a
proper pic from this (atleast i hope so

[Frost]

(I wish I knew how to get around painter... maybe I'll try again tonight).

Nice work Inferno, welcome to the forum. it looks pretty good, but what bothers me the most I guess is her head/face... I think her face is too long for her skull...

[inferno]

yes, i may right, i take care of that.
next time i should look after a real
model :)

[inferno]

btw check out my gallery at www.menyhei.hu
(gonna upload soon!)

[owl]

Looks very promising!

However, as I trust you were after some critics too, here goes: As Frost pointed out, some problems on the face/head. Her eyes&nose are slightly more towards the "camera" than her mouth which is pointing more to the right... alternatively, her lips are very (too) "full", Test this by trying to draw a middle line across her face and think how her profile would look: lips would be very far up front and whatever-the-part-between-nose-and- upper-lip-is-called would be very diagonal and close to horizontal.

Her left breast appears to have less volume than the right one. The one closer to the spectator (her right) is ... ummm... more pendulous (hate to use this word in this context :-) than her more upright left one.

Women rarely have very strong neck, I'd tune her's somewhat thinner.

Maybe making her sword somewhat more "sharp" and "orderly" in the final art would also look good -- also a good contrast to her curved forms.

I repeat: looks very good already, so hopefully my critics did not sound too harsh. I am a little worried, because as a newcomer, maybe I should keep a lower profile before I have proven myself :-)

Keep up the good work!

[This message has been edited by owl (edited November 01, 2000).]

[inferno]

yes, I agree, thx for the critiques mates! I'm gonna fix the errors I made and post a new preview later.

[yoshi]

i like the look of that. I would change her nose and fix the sword and maybe lower and move her cheekbones to the sides. You managed to make the spec highlights look good, which is rare.

[This message has been edited by yoshi (edited November 02, 2000).]

[inferno]

thx

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INF
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