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Aius_Lytebringer · Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 8:14 pm

Helloo!
Man there are some talented people on this board. Anyway, here's one of my new pics, and I wanted some opinions on my linework. I like doing linework then coloring it but I'm also starting to get into the "Painting" aspect more. Thanks in advance, looking forward to comments.

Thank you,
-Aius

*Update*
I did notice that her legs are a little strange. I think it is the fact that the right shoe faces a strange angle and both legs meet on the same plane. The one on the right should be farther back in space...

[This message has been edited by Aius_Lytebringer (edited October 29, 2000).]

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 8:41 pm

Very awesome pic. Kinda looks animeish to me. But.....nah...

I think the perspective on the legs/feet are a bit odd. I tried standing in that position and it hurt.

sacrelicious · Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 8:44 pm

It looks good, my only comment is that for a fairly slender girl, she has pretty thick upper arms. And this is only personal opinion, but you may want to put a quick line or two to suggest fingernails, you've gone into a bit of detail in other spots and it might match up better. But it looks great, you've conveyed her feelings quite well with what you've done. Color would be good too!

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A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

Fucking disco!

Are those high heeled boots?

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Guy · Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 11:34 pm

cool. i like. i noticed the foot thing too. its mostly the left foot. we shouldnt be seeing it directly from the side like that. we should be looking a little more down on it. other then that. i really like it. show us when its coloured to eh?

Seraphire · Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 1:38 pm

Cool pic. I like it!

I don't know anything about how to go about doing myself, but I'd suggest you try implementing lineweight into your pics. As nice as this art is, the lines have all the same value.

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iska · Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 11:13 pm

She's one hot cutie! rispekt!
I hope you'll do 90minute movie of her

--iska

Mime · Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 6:52 pm

Aius, very nice linework, i like the pose, and even if the right leg/feet seem a bit odd i like the feeling it is giving to the picture.
I am trying to learn coloring, would you mind if i try to color/paint your linework and post it here ? the image is appealing me

Aius_Lytebringer · Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 4:59 am

Hey no problem, I'm coloring her as well, I'd like to see your work up here too, so post it when you're done! :P

chsxf · Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 8:25 am

Hi.
Here is my attempt at coloring your line art (very good by the way). Post your comments.

It was done with Photoshop w/ a Wacom.

Mime · Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 11:26 am

Nice Chsxf, i will post my attempt very soon

Mime · Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 5:27 pm

I posted my attempt in a new thread, here : http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/006123.html

Aius_Lytebringer · Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 8:40 pm

Very cool guys, I'll have mine up soon ( As soon as I get done with all these damn art assignments! :P )

-Aius

n8 · Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 9:02 pm

me thinks shed look better as a blonde...just my opinion lookin at the linework tho.. =)

Dryfire · Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 12:43 am

Why did you draw a picture of my girlfriend???!! j/k Nice linework

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