Sijun Forums Forum Index
Log in to check your private messages
My Profile Search Who's Online Member List FAQ Register Login Sijun Forums Forum Index

This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.
   Sijun Forums Forum Index >> Archive : Sep99 - Dec00
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author   Topic : "CRIT: Abandoned house by the forest"
Gecko
member


Member #
Joined: 07 Mar 2000
Posts: 876
Location: Finland

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 5:27 pm     Reply with quote
This is a bit faster pic, started in the evening and finished before sunrise :)

Here's what i started with:



Then continued to blow the size up to 2000xsomething and started painting in the details... really wasn't sure what to do with the house so the last thing was to slap another wall up, punch the ceiling broken and put a table in the middle.




------------------
Gecko
[email protected]
GeckoArt.Net
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Nightime
member


Member #
Joined: 10 Apr 2000
Posts: 141
Location: NJ, USA

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 5:29 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, love it!

(No critique from me)

JJ

------------------
JJ / Nightime
http://members.home.net/jeremy12/web/
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
Sedul
member


Member #
Joined: 20 Sep 2000
Posts: 119
Location: Richmond Hill

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 5:33 pm     Reply with quote
Gecko, u never seem to stop amazing me. wiht u're werk !! keep it up



------------------
<|--Sedul--|>
Amateur Graphix Artist

"Maybe I'm just too sexy for you..."
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
aNoah
member


Member #
Joined: 03 Oct 2000
Posts: 150
Location: Columbia, MD USA

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 5:34 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for posting nature pictures. It is nice to see some artwork that doesn't fall into the warrior/chick/robot category.

------------------
-aNoah
Current Project Snapshot
My Gallery
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Flinthawk
member


Member #
Joined: 14 Oct 2000
Posts: 415
Location: Los Angeles

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 5:37 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, nice stuff. I like the handling of the brush all along the right side of the image and the lighting in the house. The broken roof was a nice touch, too. Keep up the good work.

-Flinthawk
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
aNoah
member


Member #
Joined: 03 Oct 2000
Posts: 150
Location: Columbia, MD USA

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 6:18 pm     Reply with quote
You'd expect more replies to something this good. Maybe most of the people on this forum don't really appreciate this kind of thing?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Dryfire
member


Member #
Joined: 21 May 2000
Posts: 945
Location: Long Island, NY

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 6:23 pm     Reply with quote
Alright When is Tarzan coming home? I really like the tree on the left hand side, very nice

------------------
-=DryFire=-
'Reality is just a dream'
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail AIM Address MSN Messenger
Gecko
member


Member #
Joined: 07 Mar 2000
Posts: 876
Location: Finland

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 6:26 pm     Reply with quote
anoah: I noticed the subject has to have something to do with the number of replies after I posted some of my bird pics.
About 2 of the replies commented the pics :):)

I understand that people won't comment much on something they're not interested in, but it sucks when you'd need some critique badly yet there's no one willing to give any...

(Woops, the 2 big trees on the left don't cast any shadow on the house, hehe)

This time it's pretty safe to say I'm gonna get some sleep and not paint all night, since I already did that :Q G'night!

------------------
Gecko
[email protected]
GeckoArt.Net

[This message has been edited by Gecko (edited October 28, 2000).]
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
elam
member


Member #
Joined: 27 Sep 2000
Posts: 456
Location: Motown

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 7:30 pm     Reply with quote
This is beautiful. reminds me of the animated Tarzan movie.

elam
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
Flinthawk
member


Member #
Joined: 14 Oct 2000
Posts: 415
Location: Los Angeles

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 7:43 pm     Reply with quote
Well, on the subject of posts getting replies I seem to notice that if you put 'sexy', 'female', 'nude', etc. in your subject that it'll get bumped for much longer and thus get more replies. Can we say 'duh', hehe. It's a shame that others that need some help and critque only get a few replies from the people that tend to look into every single thread (like me lately). It's a shame that everybody doesn't have the time to look and reply on every thread, too, but that's not anybody's fault. I'm just glad that at least this place exists as a great forum for picking up lots of hints, tips, experiences and so on, regardless of how much specific help I get on any piece I decide to post.

Anyway, I have to go edit my thread topic to "SEXY, NUDE FEMALE: Take a peek"...

-Flinthawk
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Farwalker
member


Member #
Joined: 20 Feb 2000
Posts: 228
Location: Las Vegas, NV

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 7:59 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work Gecko!

I always enjoying seeing your artwork.

Keep it up!


------------------
Gamingvault.com
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
aNoah
member


Member #
Joined: 03 Oct 2000
Posts: 150
Location: Columbia, MD USA

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 8:14 pm     Reply with quote
I see your point about the trees. It might be a pain to put the shadow in

criticism
The tree on the left jumps out as weird. I think it might be the fact that the the trunks and branches seems to get thicker at the top, while tree limbs should always get thinner.
(A quick thing I tried right on the spot)



I tried setting the tool to pressure, and trying to vary the thickness through that. It worked for the most part, but I still needed to use the eraser a little.
I'm always looking forward to your paintings.

------------------
-aNoah
Current Project Snapshot
My Gallery

[This message has been edited by aNoah (edited October 29, 2000).]
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
daz199
member


Member #
Joined: 30 Dec 1999
Posts: 415
Location: Surrey, BC, Canada

PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 8:21 pm     Reply with quote
wow
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message MSN Messenger
YourMum
member


Member #
Joined: 04 Sep 2000
Posts: 362
Location: HKI, Finland

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 12:24 am     Reply with quote
Geck, man...!

You painted very nice picture. I agree with people that it's really nice that we have artists here who want to draw anything else but warrior stuff and something like that.

Oh... and now I see your point on this pic from what we talked about. This plays well. I thought that you are going to paint some larger views.

How long it took? Did you paint it over the last night?

Keep up the interesting and exiting nature! Cheers,

-Juha-
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
ceenda
member


Member #
Joined: 27 Jun 2000
Posts: 2030

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 6:00 am     Reply with quote
Very nice work Gecko! [stares into pic] There must be a reptile of some kind in there somewhere... hmm...

I wondered what it would be like to do some foreground bushes on a seperate layer, do a gaussian blur and put them on top as though they were out of focus and the viewer was concentrating on the house.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
KachimbA
junior member


Member #
Joined: 24 Aug 2000
Posts: 27
Location: Valencia, Espa�a

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 6:10 am     Reply with quote
Wow, GREAT pic!

Really like the colours, and all the detail you put in there.

You could lighten up those dark parts a bit.
I guess light is coming from the left. How about putting that hole in the left part of the ceiling and letting the light penetrate the house. I think that could add a lot to the atmosphere. Thaks for reading anyway.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Gecko
member


Member #
Joined: 07 Mar 2000
Posts: 876
Location: Finland

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 7:30 am     Reply with quote
Did some more work on the pic:
After flattening the whole image, I resized the pic to 4000xsomething and went to work on the details of the house, and added the missing shadow on the house. I wasn't completely happy with the forest either, so I loaded up Painter and lightened things up a bit.. blended some of the colors as well.

ceeenda: Sorry I let you down with the missing reptile... now I have to do a Special Edition pic for you. :]
About the gauss blur, I really hate it whenever it's used in objects that are in the foreground. It might give a photographic effect, but that's copying a flaw from other medium, in which I don't see much point :)

aNoah: you're right about the trees, I thickened the trunk just a bit so it wouldn't stand out so much. The branches, the same mistake but it doesn't look bad in my eyes so I let them be.

Kachimba: I think I should've done that in the first place (the hole in the ceiling), it would most probably look much better, not sure if I want to touch the pic anymore though :I.

Yourmom: yeah one night. Another hour today.



------------------
Gecko
[email protected]
GeckoArt.Net
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
aNoah
member


Member #
Joined: 03 Oct 2000
Posts: 150
Location: Columbia, MD USA

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 7:37 am     Reply with quote
Ahh, it looks very nice. Is this the maximum res?... I wanna make it my wallpaper for a while if you don't mind

So, aghm, yeah if you can post a higher res image and sign it... that would be great.

Thanks

------------------
-aNoah
Current Project Snapshot
My Gallery

[This message has been edited by aNoah (edited October 29, 2000).]
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Jenn
member


Member #
Joined: 25 Jul 2000
Posts: 1055
Location: Melbourne, VIC, OZ

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 2:44 pm     Reply with quote
Damn.. Looks funky as usual Gecko

Have you got a homepage?

------------------
DarkChyld
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
aNoah
member


Member #
Joined: 03 Oct 2000
Posts: 150
Location: Columbia, MD USA

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 2:58 pm     Reply with quote
OMFG, hey jenn... look at the bottom of every post Gecko makes... HAVE YOU GOT A HOMEPAGE... I THINK HE MIGHT!

------------------
-aNoah
Current Project Snapshot
My Gallery
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Danny
member


Member #
Joined: 27 Jan 2000
Posts: 386
Location: Alcyone, Pleiadians

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 3:00 pm     Reply with quote
VERY nice stuff Gecko! I love the mood.. Do keep going like this..




------------------
[email protected]

Trust in Trance
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
Icannon
member


Member #
Joined: 13 Sep 2000
Posts: 597
Location: st.albert, AB, Canada

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 3:20 pm     Reply with quote
that's nice, gecko. i like the colors and how you did the cast shadows. something that throws me off a little is the perspective on the house. the house seems distoreted (maybe it's supposed to be?) yet, the bridge is nice and straight. maybe it's just preference.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Delucubus
member


Member #
Joined: 12 Oct 2000
Posts: 127
Location: Chico, CA

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 4:50 pm     Reply with quote
Hey Gecko, nice work man. I was going to comment on the fact that in the first pick the closest beam on the left looked like it was floating, but you fixed that.

Again, nice job.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Superbug
member


Member #
Joined: 12 Jul 2000
Posts: 544
Location: Canada

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 7:58 pm     Reply with quote
Sorry for not replying earlier man i never saw this post. All i can say is WOW! I love seeing the process of how things are done. I
personnaly think that's more interesting than the final picture.

I particularly like the steps and how they fade out. wonderful!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
klaivu
member


Member #
Joined: 29 Jan 2000
Posts: 551
Location: Helsinki, Finland

PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 3:07 am     Reply with quote
Hyv�� kakkaa.
Menep� tekem��n lis��.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
eetu
member


Member #
Joined: 27 May 2000
Posts: 289
Location: helsinki, finland

PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 3:13 am     Reply with quote
sanoisinpa jopa ett� kuumaa kakkaa :)

kansa vaatii lis��

eetu.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Display posts from previous:   
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Sijun Forums Forum Index -> Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum




Powered by phpBB © 2005 phpBB Group