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ArMaDoN
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 Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 6:35 am |
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Hi Guys,
Finally the stupid Armadon has decided to post some kind of art here. thx alot for all your help through this week and for fred's i have aqcuired about 3 books on anatomy and drawing including Glenn Villpu's Tutorial on Drawing from Life.
After the First week of studying i have this pic posted... i want to ask all of you to Crit on this and Pls do this for
Take the pic save it and show me the mistakes i made and fix it a little so i know what to fix .. this pic i want to use to work on until it's perfect with the help from you guys .. after you fixed the pic email it to me or post it here again pls! thx alot
here it comes
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ArMaDoN
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 7:17 am |
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Can't Anyone help me on crits or anything ... pls! thx alot!
it's not that bad!
i hope!
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aNoah
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 7:18 am |
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I think that you need to try and work this further. Right now it is a sketch. If there are any problems with it, they will become more evident or fixed one you actually start painting. So work on it some more, and then ask for another critique.
I don't mean to bash you down... but unless a person has a kind heart, they are not going to want to critique a practice exercise.
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Liquid!
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 6:04 pm |
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I think ANoah is right. I often see posts that aren't far enough done for me to be able to comment on any worthwhile level. The more finished something is the easier it is to give you constructive feedback. Finish the sketch more fully and then have someone here try to help you out with it! 
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StormVermin
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 6:31 pm |
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I disagree.
His RIGHT arm looks like it is shifted over to OUR left a little too much. Move it right towards his sholder more... |
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Skeezer
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 6:54 pm |
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Take a look at the positioning of the head, I think it may be to far forward on the torso.
Try drawing in where the spinal column connects to the base of the skull, that might show you where to place it.
In that pose I think the torso has got a barrel shape, if you wraped the left(his left) chest muscle more around the rib cage I think that might fix it.
It's a good start just keep working at it. |
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ArMaDoN
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 7:59 pm |
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Hey Guys thx alot for replying ... i really enjoyed that!
cool!
i will fix it and work on it some more so that you can guys comment on it again if you don;t mind .. thx alot ... i know it's just a sketch but the fundamentals must be right to start colouring it! i think 
i will work and draw on it some more thx alot once more |
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