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Wlv!
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 Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 8:40 am |
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This is a portrait I am doing for a friend.
Time invested so far is around 2hrs.
Feed back good or bad is welcome.
Thanks
WLv! |
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Nex
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| Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 10:29 am |
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I like it, nice color style!
the face looks maybe a bit too overexposed compared to the hair to me.
[This message has been edited by Nex (edited October 28, 2000).] |
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Wlv!
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| Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 2:04 pm |
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Hey thx fer the feed backs 
I added some more deapth to the face
you might have to refresh to see the
changes on you browser.
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Gecko
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Wildkat
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| Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 6:56 pm |
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very nice...
great colors...
she'll love it  |
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Jonner
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| Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 11:21 pm |
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Hey Wlv! that's top stuff. Nice sense of movement in the brush strokes.. great definition in the eyes!!
I agree with Nex though, you need a little more shading on her face. It kinda looks like she's wearing white face paint at the mo' Some of that gorgeous hair would probably be casting shadows on her face...
Keep it up...
Jonner
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aNoah
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| Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 11:26 pm |
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Say, do you think she's available? hehe
Very nice job so far. If you post the reference photo up as well, people will give you much more/better feedback.
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Liquid!
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 2:10 am |
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Wow. Nice stuff! Really like the technique.
Only thing that seems to stand out is the hair on her left. It seems to end a bit too abruptly when it comes to the shoulder.
Hope that makes even remotely sense... (its getting late... ) |
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