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Superbug
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 Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2000 9:26 am |
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Did a small update for the cy pic.
His chest area I'm not happy with, I'm not quite sure what's wrong but it does seem awfully flat
Also, in a lot of pictures like Masamune Shirows stuff, I see a lot of intricate detailed wires and "parts". Anyone have any idea of ways to make really nice looking wires and kinof chaotic type wiring without having to spend too much time on detail?
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exo
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| Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2000 10:55 am |
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Its the breastplates fault that it look so flat. Move them down a bit.
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LethargicBoy
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| Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2000 2:40 pm |
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| looks cool, I like the colors,but maybe you could try to get rid of the blue lines...add a background! |
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Ryan
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aNoah
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| Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2000 9:37 pm |
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I dunno if you want this critique or not, but you should include more shoulders and chest into this image if you want the painting to look balanced. Right now he looks as if he's gonna topple over 
It would be just a few brush strokes, but it would do wonders for you composition. I would extend the image to the sides (shoulders), and a little bit down (chest). The head looks pretty neat. I like the design.
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[This message has been edited by aNoah (edited October 27, 2000).] |
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