[UmGramm]

comments are welcome,,, ;-]

[This message has been edited by UmGramm (edited October 27, 2000).]

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[exo]

Am i wrong if i say that the head and the arms are copied and pasted into the pic, and that you made the sweater by hand?

There are some problems i see here.
The shoulder, overarm area looks a bit to big for the underarms.

The green, blue and yellow wavy thingie looks a bit too filterish, try to stay away from that. Trained eyes hate that.


Sorry about the hardish feedback.

Its cool idea tho.

Who's the girl in the pic btw?

-exo

[UmGramm]

I overlayed the original picture, so the measures are near to real, so...

[The shoulder, overarm area looks a bit to big for the underarms.]
- the original shirt was that voluminous.

[The green, blue and yellow wavy thingie looks a bit too filterish, try to stay away from that. Trained eyes hate that.]
- so what have I to do, to make i look less filterish?


[Sorry about the hardish feedback.]
I can stand it ;-]

[Its cool idea tho. ]
so look for 'it's magic, isn't it' , I postes before,,, it's a bit like this on, in the idea...

[Who's the girl in the pic btw?]
Leelee Sobieskie, a model and actress

thanx , for critics... they're always welcome ;-]



[This message has been edited by UmGramm (edited October 27, 2000).]