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Hello,

It's a nice painting, I guess you didn't get many replys because you didn't specify in the beginning that it's a photo reference. Remember that artists are very careful when it comes to right ...

It's a great piece. Only two comments: I didn't quite understand her lips until I saw the close-up, maybe tone down the top part of the lips so it doesn't get completely lost.

Second comment, soften ...

One last thing then, since you don't want to change your drawing too much. Her wrists, they're skinny and a bit strange. Her right wrist especially, there's an extra bend there that shouldn't be there ...

Jezebel,

I love the feel of the drawing, great attitude in the pose, overall I like it alot. I did a quick sketch-over (need to get a new usb-wacom), and in doing so I noticed a few things.

She's go ...

Hello,

I'd venture to say that this is a series because of this great [url=http://www.workshopcrew.com/mmza/molly.html]painting.

Stunning work, very warm, beautiful style, your lost edges are als ...

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Very nice drawing, everything looks in place. Only two crits, her butt looks a little strange, and I'd be careful not to make the composition too centric, maybe offset her a little to the sid ...

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This is a very beautiful piece. I think the shallower modeling of the forms goes perfectly with the subject-matter; so I would not try to add depth to it.

The textures are wonderful, and ag ...

Hi,

That is a beautiful painting, has a great feel to it, forms are very structured and solid. Here are my crits:

1. Use a little atmospheric perspective to separate the background from the figur ...

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I agree with jerO, maybe blur the background a bit more. Also, if you want a general guideline for the ears, this is it: Top of the ear aligned with the eyebrow, bottom of th ear aligned w ...

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I'd also make you a pen sketch, but I should be at class right about in, oh 2 minutes.

Anyway, draw a center line down through her face, that'll help you position the forehead (which you ha ...

Corn Pops,

I would not ask her because she is not my friend, nor do I know her. I was just venting, mainly because I got back my pictures from being developed like 5 min. before posting; and all ...

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I like the second and the third drawings especially. Make sure to note the anatomical landmarks in your drawing (shoulders, clavicles) if you are going for a realistic style.

You seem to li ...

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That is a beautiful drawing. There's really nothing to critique. Your drawing is excelent, your line weight control has great delicacy and you have a good knowledge of anatomy. The only thing ...

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Just finished a little color rough, it's not too detailed or finished, mostly was mixing color to see what colors i'd approximately use.

Also, I decided to change the scale, the paint ...

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Great illustration, it's consistent, you've got a nice style, very good job.

I'm not too sure about your last hair edit though. The lighter parts of the hair go way too light, tone them dow ...

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Very nice image, lots of mood, nice lighting too. One of the nicest I've seen today.

On the anatomy and proportions, they're pretty solid. I'd change her right (our left) forearm a bit thou ...

Great job!

I also remember where you were and you've come much farther, congrats.

Here's my opinion on it. I'm not too sure that the green bubbly background works, it seems you wanted to go for a ...

Hi,

Here's my opinion on the subject: You don't learn much by tracing.

Some people maintain that by tracing you can just focus on the color and modeling of the forms without worrying about the ...

Beautiful painting, I love it, I'd only work out two things:

1) the spear she's holding seems to be drawn as if it was parallel to us, but her body position seems to indicate it's diagonal. Keep an e ...

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Very nice drawing, I agree with the above post, define the feet in a vertical plain.

Also, the legs seem a little short to me, the knees are especially high. Check the distance in your ...

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Well, I'm going to start working on this painting tomorrow. I've been looking for reference all day, mostly seascapes and models for colors, skintones, etc.

I saw a few colorings by o ...

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Remember the sillhoute rule, it'll be very hard to tell that he has a match in his right hand if it's the same value as his hand.

A match seems a bit small too, how about making it obv ...

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Well, I incorporated a little of the advice I got from my previous post and did this. This is for my perspective class, I just have to give in a work in progress tomorrow. Should be polished ...

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Wow, thanks all for your feedback, It helps alot:

- maceface: ya, oil is wonderful, give it a serious effort. At first it's very frustrating, but after a while you get the hang of it.

- b ...

sorry bout that, got posted twice by mistake.

-tdl

[ November 08, 2001: Message edited by: tdl ]

BTW, here's a still life in oil, I like to keep a looser brushstroke, that's why I was very inspired by Spooge (and found myself here images/smiles/icon_wink.gif.

http://www.illusionart.com/pi/st ...

Hello,

Well, I finally decided to take the plunge into digital painting. It hasn't been painless though, in fact it has been very far away from painless.

I'm used to painting with oil from m ...