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Topic: octopussy |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 8
Views: 3323
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 5:58 pm Subject: octopussy |
i really like the use of colors. looking at it in a character design stand point, what kind of powers does she have, what time period is she from, and why the hat and google? just wondering. anyway ... |
Topic: Legolas |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 5
Views: 1993
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:14 am Subject: Legolas |
i think that what would be a better criticism would be to vary your line weight as to create a heirarchy of what you want people to notice first about it. nice rendering. |
Topic: a sticky situation |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 3
Views: 1874
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:07 am Subject: a sticky situation |
yeah i agree, i think i could taper the arm a bit right before it intersects the wrist. i think though that despite the fact, she will have a bit of a "log arm" because of the foreshortening. thanks ... |
Topic: a sticky situation |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 3
Views: 1874
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2003 11:15 pm Subject: a sticky situation |
ooopss...sigup didnt like my jpeg...he he...jokes on me
http://sigup.com/sigs/kristi.gif |
Topic: Industrial Beauty |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 10
Views: 4070
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 5:31 pm Subject: Industrial Beauty |
cool line art. i would give her more dramatic lighting especially in the foreground. basically make everything in the foreground high contrast, dark darks and light lights. the background competes ... |
Topic: fixing :: joe |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 12
Views: 5202
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 4:31 pm Subject: fixing :: joe |
bengal...dont fix the perspective...its fine. if there are perspective issues they are minimal and insignificant. getting back to what you asked about color balance, i think, if we are on the same p ... |
Topic: Zombie Thread...? |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 47
Views: 20413
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2003 12:54 am Subject: Zombie Thread...? |
hey mindsiphon...its great. how did you go about getting those textures? |
Topic: Nude Lady Monster Illustration |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 9
Views: 4621
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2003 12:28 am Subject: Nude Lady Monster Illustration |
jeez...i havent posted a reply in close to 2 yrs but this one deserves my first one. that is my vision of hell, a naked fat chick with hairy nipples
(among other things)...yes, you have embodied he ... |
Topic: This started out as spooge's head assignment |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 7
Views: 1693
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 12:59 pm Subject: This started out as spooge's head assignment |
the thing in his hand is a sling, you know, to throw rocks with...duh. interesting take on a masterpiece, a kinda sacrilegious defiling of a martyr by renouncing common morals and substituting them w ... |
Topic: A really Ramera-Girl... Woahhhh!!!! |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 3
Views: 1534
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 8:52 am Subject: A really Ramera-Girl... Woahhhh!!!! |
oh my god...she is hideous, but she has a nice rack. is it me or does she have a snot bubble coming out of her nose? she fits the meaning of "hood rat", thats for sure. part of me wants to barf in d ... |
Topic: Little Teddy will not die. |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 14
Views: 3461
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 8:13 am Subject: Little Teddy will not die. |
cool. scary. uh, i think i sh*t my own undies. it seems as though she has six toes but she doesn't. maybe you could oush the toes together more and thin the ankle out a bit. hmmm...i think it woul ... |
Topic: Cutest self portrait I've ever made! |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 25
Views: 4033
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 8:06 am Subject: Cutest self portrait I've ever made! |
that's so cool, but i really wish you would make a hair tutorial thread kinda like the one you did on lips. your way of drawing hair is perfected to an "art"...he he. anyway, do that for me an i wil ... |
Topic: MICHAEL JACKSON |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 15
Views: 3129
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2001 2:32 pm Subject: MICHAEL JACKSON |
is that going to be the cover or are you doing it from some reference that i probably haven't seen? it is so real, its scary. uh, one question, why white? i know he is light skinned but damn. anyway ... |
Topic: Another one bites the dust. (Nudity Warning) |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 4
Views: 1204
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2001 12:47 pm Subject: Another one bites the dust. (Nudity Warning) |
i like the pose and the composition. i would darken the waters reflection to match the sky and give the girl more reds and oranges in her skin tone. its too monotone and could use some variations. ma ... |
Topic: heads for Dr. Bang |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 117
Views: 37565
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2001 9:19 am Subject: heads for Dr. Bang |
synj has by far captured the essence of the subjects the best...bravo synj!!!
images/smiles/icon_razz.gif images/smiles/icon_razz.gif images/smiles/icon_razz.gif |
Topic: Pin-Ups |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 103
Views: 29927
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 2:55 pm Subject: Pin-Ups |
this has got to be the best thread yet, next to the green monkey one. just want to say big ups to stahlberg and deathgrip, great pictures. deathgrip managed to make a pretty realistic chick with stun ... |
Topic: finnish summer |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 14
Views: 3329
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 1:59 pm Subject: finnish summer |
don't feel bad...the weather here in california,usa hasn't been that much better recently, it is just now beginning to get warm and sunny. but i agree...the handle needs to be thinner. nice picture th ... |
Topic: Selfportrait |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 24
Views: 6326
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 2:29 pm Subject: Selfportrait |
dope...you remind me of that mexican cop in "traffic", even though you probably aren't mexican. dope pic. keep 'em coming. |
Topic: Hot Bug Sex |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 27
Views: 7792
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 2:07 pm Subject: Hot Bug Sex |
i don't comment on many threads but this one i gotta hit up. wow. that man-bug is digging deep...rock on. |
Topic: Elf.....!!!!! |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 2
Views: 975
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 7:35 am Subject: Elf.....!!!!! |
wow...now i can forget about coffee this morning. yeah that is a little scandalous, even for someone like myself who enjoys naked art. i think its the provocative spread-eagle position she is in. n ... |
Topic: A awsome unique web site.. i am pretty sure you have not see |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 24
Views: 6943
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 2:44 pm Subject: A awsome unique web site.. i am pretty sure you have not see |
hi i am stneil777 and i just started this rad site called sijun.com. its all conceptualized and monitored by me...yes me, me, me!!! you might also be familar with my franchize called carl's jr. yes ... |
Topic: my little 3d image |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 33
Views: 11031
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2001 2:49 pm Subject: my little 3d image |
i agree with the upper face being flat comment and i would also like to add that her visible breast is too high and should be leveled with her other one, respectful of perspective. one other thing is ... |
Topic: 3D Soldier |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 4
Views: 1264
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 8:46 am Subject: 3D Soldier |
i think the pants look like melted candle wax. the rest seems good though. i would just work on making the folds and creases in the pants look more realistic. it seems that they just float there in ... |
Topic: Nukleon's orc drawing coloured |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 9
Views: 2109
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2001 7:33 am Subject: Nukleon's orc drawing coloured |
i really appreciate the fact that he has green skin but brown nipples...dope. images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif |
Topic: Sketch of a girl... all comments wanted |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 4
Views: 1463
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 3:00 pm Subject: Sketch of a girl... all comments wanted |
i would work more on the light source and the contours of the face. as it stands now she comes off kinda cartoonish, if thats what youre going for. dont be afraid to get some darker darks and lighte ... |
Topic: spiderman.....spiderman |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 99
Views: 23773
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 9:51 am Subject: spiderman.....spiderman |
why is it that spidey's package is in the center of the pict.? hmmm, maybe an underlying motive here.... |
Topic: First submission! *the crowd goes wild* |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 2
Views: 824
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 8:51 am Subject: First submission! *the crowd goes wild* |
looks like that bowel movement hurts...*covers eyes*. well it is interesting if nothing else, not to be too harsh. i think you should spend more time on your drawings. include a primary light sourc ... |
Topic: heads for Dr. Bang |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 117
Views: 37565
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 3:00 pm Subject: heads for Dr. Bang |
hey spoogy...what is your site address?...thanks. |
Topic: Post your Orcs, goddamit! |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 57
Views: 14955
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 7:37 am Subject: Post your Orcs, goddamit! |
The first time i heard of orcs was from JRRTolkien, who made them up as a race of goblins that were actually called orcs in other middle earth languages, such as the one from Hobbiton. so in effect t ... |
Topic: Orc Warrior! |
mellowsmoothe
Replies: 9
Views: 2552
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon May 21, 2001 7:50 am Subject: Orc Warrior! |
love the bird and the bird sh*t...great! |
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