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 Topic: Color composition-Looking for the next best thing |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 7 Views: 2208 |
 Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 6:30 pm Subject: Color composition-Looking for the next best thing |
| if that's not a large sack on the main character's back, it looks to be one. perhaps attempt to seperate the character from that background a little more., also, the skyline is a bit ambiguous. You m ... | |
| Topic: Mecha Concept WIP |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 15 Views: 3725 |
Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 6:26 pm Subject: Mecha Concept WIP |
| those are some great shapes. push it to a final level and definately post. i really dig that look. & |
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| Topic: zealot of rama (rough) |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 4 Views: 1424 |
Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 6:24 pm Subject: zealot of rama (rough) |
| the folds in her cloak look a little too "crunchy"? the fabric looks like a trash bag... maybe if you went easier on it and drew more sweeping flowing folds it would look cool. her hand looks flat. ... | |
| Topic: old building |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 3 Views: 1085 |
Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 5:48 pm Subject: old building |
| it looks to me as if you've run filters over a render... somehting like a colorization, a blurred overlayed blown out layer, the grain:clumped filter, and possibly a cutout. also, i can see some mirro ... | |
| Topic: Re-TOUCHE art... |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 6 Views: 1636 |
Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 3:21 pm Subject: Re-TOUCHE art... |
| that hand, the one on the right there... (as well as the one on the left...) is wac. construction is wrong. don't get those fingers and foreshortening confused for the whole hand. look at what you ... |
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| Topic: New guy in the fourms :D |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 6 Views: 1715 |
Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 3:11 pm Subject: New guy in the fourms :D |
| i'll give you the courtesy of this bump and open my mouth... your image up top is confusing to me. there is no direction. the conrast is high and the eyes are all fighting for attemption as they ar ... |
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| Topic: I R Slow,,, finished the lovable space boob... |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 16 Views: 2845 |
Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 3:01 pm Subject: I R Slow,,, finished the lovable space boob... |
| nice. what could you add? hmm... maybe some strange random details or color variations. maybe if you jump out of your swatches and rock some more saturated purples or some spots of vivids. just to ... |
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| Topic: Tribute to Salvador Dali |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 6 Views: 1725 |
Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 2:43 pm Subject: Tribute to Salvador Dali |
| that's fresh. i understand the point that it's too busy; it is very busy. most of the images i see on the net aren't busy enough, so it's nice to see the contrasting piece. as a tribute collage, th ... |
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| Topic: ...after a hard day in a coalfactory |
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| kryticalerror Replies: 11 Views: 2189 |
Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 2:40 pm Subject: ...after a hard day in a coalfactory |
| 1. why is it called after a hard day at the coal factory? i think you should work on your substance. 2. make the shot interesting. if the center of interest is that man's eye... that's pretty much ... |
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