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First off, kewl image. Nicely done.

What is really drawing me into this picture is the hair. If you look at what you've done there it's really apparent why. You have shaded areas interspersed wi ...

Thanks for the crit Devy, it was exactly what I was looking for. A kick in the butt. I like what you said about the composition of the picture being a little too symmetricial, so in my sketching for ...

I think that you're getting better if these are recent pictures that you have done. The best of the bunch has to be the Yuna at the bottom. The lips are a little tilted, and you need to learn how to ...

Just wanted to share this, because I was staring at it earlier and couldn't decide what to do.

This is a sketch from my sketchbook (hence the odd tilt). The Faerie is trapped in a bubble of magi ...

Diaper rash: Can you please exptrapolate what you were saying about the Wes Burt Sketchbook thing. I can see a link there, but no more so than anybody who has put more than one sketch on a page of t ...

I'm interested, I just don't want the middle square.

My two cents is that the background of the buildings and such is drawing your eye away from the subject matter, the person being chased. I do like how you have the face in the center of several lines ...

Basicially to push it further, I would suggest figuring out where the light sources are coming from. You have a light source behind him, which should produce a halo effect on the hair and all edges w ...

2D and 3D work can work well together at times, but I think you're right in this case it sin't working too well. What I'm really seeing is that it could work, but a couple of things need to be achiev ...

Anatomical Mistakes I can see:

The forehead is a bit too big, and the receding hairline thing on the forehead highlight......... Connection of hair to head on by the ear is good, just not getting ...

Just one question: Are you trying to go more realistic, or surrealistic with this piece. I just bring this up due to errors in the anatomy that could possibly be deliberate.

Maybe a quick word on ...

You don't really need to be that humbled as this piece proves that you can do the work that others in this forum can. IT's all a matter of practice. If everything could be done just by looking at it ...

looking pretty good so far. Just remember to touch the other items as you're doing the figure. The figure looks great but the cloak isn't showing any indication of volume within it. Although that m ...

The picture with the fence works for me, the lopsidedness just give the picture movement for the eyes. The rest however don't really work for me.

I agree with the shadow thing, it's like we tell ...

To me the grittiness of the speedpainting draws me into it more than the perfection of the actual drawing. It seems to me as if the speed painting has more life to it, a vibrance perhaps due to the p ...

Okay, you have your sketch. Sumaleth sent you references for hats. Now you use that reference, along with some kind of lighting reference for where you wnat your light to be coming from. The best b ...

Try this: If this is an image with everything on seperate layers use the rule of thirds to put the sun into the junction that would be at the lower left of the picture frame, to the left about half o ...

My critique to you would be a couple of things. First off is that the lighting is different on all 3 figures, yet, I"m being lead to believe that they are occupying space in the same room. They ...

Well, so far the only comment I have about the picture would be a bit on the composition. In the foreground two things are fighting for dominance: the bird and the girl. The reason being is that th ...

Kewl picture, Insane detail. However, two things are really bugging me.

The reflection on the cloth above her breats doesn't look like it's in the right place. It seems a tadd to high to me. If ...

I love the silhouette look of these pieces. Really nice.

The only crit I would give on these images is that they feel too bland to me due a bit to composition.

First off center weighting your i ...

Personally I like the look alot. I wouldn't say that it looks like a cliff face in the background, but to tell you the truth whne I first saw it with all that texture it felt like it was raining in t ...

picky picky picky. Wink

Met Art has some great photos in it, but is also a softcore porn site at times. That's the only reason why I said that.

Just a simple test for you to try. Take your image and squint at it. Squinting will allow you to see the values in the picture much better than your eye can distract you with them. If you still see ...

Kewl pics.

Work the background a bit more. Every part of the piece directly affects other parts of the piece. So you really should work everything at a constant pace versus one thing fully render ...

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Changes I made to the last one to get this one:

- Added a shadow at the top part of her abs to define her abs and define the ribcage.

- Moved her b ...

The breasts are a fix that's as easy as imagining them further away from the center fo the chest. right now you have them pushed together like they would be in a bra that creates cleavage. Hanging f ...

Two things that are really bugging me about her facial structure.

First off the jaw line is a little to the right of where it should be. Draw a line through the middle of her eyes, through the midd ...

The only tip I can give you to make this thing turn out awesome. YOu used photo reference to make the girl in the water. Keep using it instead of making things up and your picture will turn out grea ...

The key to getting better for the most part is alot of practice, and feedback. By submitting to this forum you are now getting some feedback.

The ones that catch my eye the most are the first one ...